SPN fic: Red 8/10

Nov 12, 2006 10:44

Red, Chapter 8/Between the Ribs

Huff and Puff: Gen, PG-13, loads of sordid, violent, and downright creepy scenes, swearing laid on pretty darn thick, and Sam running around like a chicken seeking revenge for its missing head. Canon characters belong to the canon gods; words and other characters belong to me. Me! You heard that Kripke? WIP, but ( Read more... )

red, supernatural, fanfic

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janissa11 November 12 2006, 15:25:14 UTC
Hmm. I'm thinking something here, lemme see if I can put it into words. It's kinda like -- well, that's not precisely it -- sorta maybe ( ... )

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big_pink November 12 2006, 16:57:13 UTC
Please. Can I hate you a little bit back? Yeah? Because even in your freakin' comments you're writing your ass off AND AT THE SAME TIME DOING NANO. Need I point that out, hm? And, hello? All the totally great things of yours I've read over the last few months -- you have nothing to be jealous of.

So unless you actually creep out of your bedroom to do me physical damage, I'm just going to take all your stunning words as compliments. Because, yeah, my ego's like that.

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lemmypie November 12 2006, 23:39:13 UTC
Totally. Best. "MEAN". comments EVER!

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anonymous November 12 2006, 15:34:12 UTC
Sam does not have brown eyes. That is not my fault.

-jmm

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big_pink November 12 2006, 15:46:42 UTC
Totally abase myself. Done and done and done.

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zelost_mind November 12 2006, 15:34:29 UTC
Oh, the scream. When Dave and Willy heard the scream. Ouch

...and Sams anger, man, he's one angry kid.

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big_pink November 12 2006, 16:58:26 UTC
Sam's anger is one of the real treats to write. Um, and what does that say about me? Hmmm.

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marinarusalka November 12 2006, 15:43:23 UTC
Ouch. I think I got a phantom pain in my side reading that first section with Dean. You always make everything that happens in your stories so vivid. Dean's pain, and Sam's scary anger, and the eerieness of Dean trapped in that Cadillac. This story has totally kept me on the edge of my seat with every chapter.

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big_pink November 12 2006, 16:59:26 UTC
I'm obviously a closet sadist when it comes to Dean. Or, um, maybe not so much in the closet.

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harrigan November 12 2006, 19:20:10 UTC
You bash them both so brilliantly, depending on whose turn it is . Sam got flayed (and more) in Cirque de Celine; now it's Dean's turn. And I always look forward to both !

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big_pink November 12 2006, 19:59:04 UTC
I like to consider myself an equal-opportunity sadist. Spread the...uh...love.

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lemmypie November 12 2006, 15:47:17 UTC
You know what I love? Your artistic integrity, Even when I'm bashing my head against it. LOL!

This looks so pretty posted in all it's posted glory.
Aren't Sam's eyes Hazel? So sometimes they can be brown.

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big_pink November 12 2006, 17:01:27 UTC
*snerk* Artistic what? What's that?

I bend to JM's artistic integrity when it comes to Sam's eye colour. I'm going to rely on the fact that she's stared into them more than I. I don't, toots, you've been in front of the actual boy -- you tell me. What's the boy's eye colour? Or were you blinded by the light?

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