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Red - Chapter Two/Fresh Meat

Oct 01, 2006 15:13

Summary: Something evil is killing treeplanters in the forests of the Pacific Northwest, possibly the same predator that Dean narrowly escaped years before. How Grimm will things get before the brothers figure it out?

Rating: Gen, PG-13 due to swearing, blood-letting, logging accidents and malevolent sexual undercurrents. WIP, will be 10 ( Read more... )

red, supernatural, fanfic

Comments 39

lemmypie October 1 2006, 19:33:34 UTC

I was coming on here to poke you about ichatting and then well since the reply is WAY down at the bottom I had to reread this again.....What does that make? And it STILL reads like it's my first time.

big_pink October 2 2006, 00:49:39 UTC

So glad that it's like the first time. Aaaaand, I'm not touching that one with a ten foot pole. I've been bi-languing too much this weekend...I just typed in 'chat' and thought I was talking about cats. Damn.

tabaqui October 1 2006, 20:24:07 UTC

Ooooh, i love it!
And of course am all curious and anxious! Where, oh where, is Papa? And Dean!
*clutches him*

This back and forth is freaky and creepy and i love the tree talk but i'm all....axious!!
*bounce*

Good stuff.
:)

Teeny thing:He’s humoring me. “Yeah, Dave’s a good, remembered me.

Left out a word there - 'guy', i'm thinkin'.

Have fun in Scotland!
*is envious*

big_pink October 2 2006, 00:51:21 UTC

You know, it's always the little sentences I throw in at the last minute that have the typos and missing words. Damn. Fixed now, thank you very much. Curiousity and anxiety go hand in hand, especially in this fandom. Will have fun in Scotland and will think about you all during momentary lapses of sobriety.

tabaqui October 2 2006, 01:36:05 UTC

Yeah - last minute stuff is always dicey.

And you will *not* think of us! You'll be having too much fun! But if you do? Feel up a Scotsman for me us. One in a kilt.
*la*

janissa11 October 1 2006, 20:24:48 UTC

Waaaaaaaaaaaaait just a cotton-pickin' second. WHO said you could go? I don't recall seeing a time-off request --

Or I could cry. *peers at you* Would that work?

Because DAMN, they're living in a junker in a GARAGE? When John shows up I'm gonna shove a stick of TNT up his ass and blow his shit up. What the FUCK? Blonde Guy freaked me right the hell out. DEAN. RUN. And 18-year-old Dean with piss in his boot. And today-Dean with all his secrets.

Dude, though: tempeh burgers are good! Sweet-potato fries! Yummers! Have to admit I draw the line at pine-needle beer, but yeah. "Do I look like I'm gonna knit a sweater?" BWAH! Oh Dean.

I'm still not all that amused at your failure to follow proper procedure vis-a-vis the whole taking unplanned time off. What? It WAS planned? Not with me! No, ma'am! Things are getting sloppy around here. We need some ORDER, DAMN IT! Chain of command! Protocol!

::muttering::

big_pink October 2 2006, 00:56:17 UTC

Damn, I know, it just kinda snuck up on me, too. One minute, merrily writing treeporn fanfic, the next -- whoosh -- off I go on a big jet airliner. Damn.

I am confessing, right here, right now, to liking all that food that Dean disparages. Miso gravy? Check. Tempeh burgers? Check. Sweet potato fries? You bet your ass. Poor Dean, not exposed to a wide range of culinary choices during his formative years. And who can we blame for that? Why yes, that paragon of parenting, John. Only in your fics, my dear, can Dean cook. It's sweet and I love it, but the boy's hopeless in my world. *Sigh.*

And you know, I think I sent in my vacation request MONTHS ago. Take it up with head office.

quellefromage October 1 2006, 20:27:14 UTC

God, you are KILLING ME with this. The details are stunning, the logging and planting and I LOVE the line about mixing demon killing with logging...most dangerous profession...no doubt. Poor tired, exhausted, responsible Dean, dodging falling limbs and creeps. And baby Dean, hiding Sammy in a garage while his damned father...(okay, not going there...)anyway. Jebus.

Dean in a health food restaurant...good thing he wasn't armed. *grins*

did you notice how I didn't bug you for another part at all this week? Restrained, I was...(or was it the restraining order?) Anyway, since I can't bug you in Scotland (squee!! Scotland!! AWESOME!!) I'll have to save it all up for when you return. Just to warn ya...

I'm gonna go read this again, because...it's just that good.

big_pink October 2 2006, 01:00:40 UTC

You really showed such restraint this week, my dear. Not one harassing polite message inquiring as to the next chapter's status. Really, above and beyond.

I was just responding above as to Dean's poor education in widening his culinary choices, and how we can all blame one person for that. John, John, John. Really, the man has a lot to answer for, not the least of which is why his son can't look a tofu dog in the eye.

anonymous October 1 2006, 20:45:42 UTC

Good chapter.Update soon.I'm still grounded,but sometimes I'll allowed on.I'm still in shock from "In My Time of Dying".My mouth dropped open when we saw the Impala.How did John even survive that?I loved Sammy and John's fight,John talking to Dean,and Sammy running to Dead!John.It didn't hit me until I went to bed Friday night and started crying.

big_pink October 2 2006, 01:04:09 UTC

Seriously? The chicken pox thing didn't work? Hm. Small wee thing, darling. Keep in mind that some readers won't have seen the new season on account of they're somewhere overseas and all. I appreciate the enthusiasm and the general overwhelming angst about 'In My Time of Dying'; maybe consider being all less spoilery next at bat, okay? But that said, yes, agree with it all, cupcake.