Fic: Say When (J/J, NC-17) 3/4

[bellap74]

Chapter Three ~ Immerse me until I believe.

Comments

[random_yayness]

oh. my. god.

*ICON* skbfauf;abf;aubf;auf;oikjglk'f;lkmgflngfs bzuh.

There is nothing about this that is not PERFECT and AMAZING and fucking SEXY.

*DEAD*

[bellap74]

*glomps*

I think I get more scared as this fic goes on so thank you for saying it works *huuuuuuuuuuuuuuge relief*

Lovely J/J - they're getting under your skin ;P
Thanks so much for reading (& stopping my low-level panic)xx

[random_yayness]

It BEYOND works, it's fucking INCREDIBLE and I love it, and the only reason my comment was so short is because I am now quite braindead after reading it. XD I'm just all nnnnggghhh now. *gigglesU*

Thank you for WRITING and POSTING. guh. Best thing I've read in a long time.

[marginaliana]

<333333333

HOMG.

Fuck, this is, like, everything I could possibly have wanted in this fic! Sexy texting and mutual wanking and teasing!

And your James' poetry is just incredible. So hot. "the fit so tight it burns for soothing" - nnnngh. "My fingers will travel you, my tongue will unravel you" - nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngh. I am dead. Completely dead. You have killed me.

And then Jeremy trying to figure out the rhyme for that last line, and I was, too, and yes! <3

LOVE THIS.

[bellap74]

*eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
You like it \o/
Woot XD
{I had fears the texting & poetry!wanking might not work - but James insisted, he likes to cover all bases.)

Thank you for liking it *continued relief*

[deliciousmelody]

Jesus CHRIST. If your mission was to slowly kill me over the past few days, well it's bloody well worked.

Phone sex. With penis poetry. And wanking. GUH.

*flails incoherently*

[bellap74]

Late comment is late!

Thanks for reading - really glad you liked it and that the penis poetry didn't ruin the penis action ;P
*squish*

[ahab99]

AKJSDHFALKSDJHFLASDL!!!!

I don't know how I'm going to survive the last part. I don't know how JEREMY is going to survive it, either! ;D

[bellap74]

Thank you for reading - really glad you liked it, Jeremy has had to survive bless him but James will insist on going at his own pace ;)

[wyvernchick]

GUH.

This is the last coherent comment you are likely to get from me on this. I am literally going to explode when I read part 4. Just so you know :)

[bellap74]

I like it when you say GUH ;D

Please to not be exploding during/after Part 4, thanks for reading part 3 and not exploding too!