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Fic: "Truce" (The Office, P/J)

Jan 11, 2007 23:45

Truce
By: Bella Lumina
Fandom/Pairing: The Office, Pam/Jim
Rating: PG-13
Canon: "Traveling Salesmen"
Notes: This is for slowdescent_, for whom she requested a 500-word fic with the prompt "The Office, Pam/Jim, compromise."
Summary: “What you saw didn’t mean anything. I swear, Jim.”

( I thought I might find you out here... )

jim/pam, the office, fic

Comments 12

popculturespong January 12 2007, 05:54:24 UTC

Aw, cute.

bellalumina January 12 2007, 20:43:05 UTC

Thanks! :)

slowdescent_ January 12 2007, 06:24:18 UTC

HOLY CRAP.

When he walks in later to find her splayed out on the tile floor, resting her head against the pedestal sink, he’s wearing a different expression. “I didn’t mean that the way that it sounded.”

Just... LOVE. That is so Jim! He's sometimes accidentally an asshole ("at least I didn't leave you at a high school hockey game") but then he's SO apologetic right after. Awesome, awesome job.

“I kissed you back that night.” “I know.” “I loved you then.” “I know.”

ACK ACK This needs to happen on the show ASAP.

In conclusion, THANK YOU. This is so amazing! I'm definitely putting it in my memories. :D!

bellalumina January 12 2007, 20:45:02 UTC

You're welcome! I'm so happy that you liked it! :)

I love apologetic Jim ... I love that he's bold enough to say the things he's thinking but also wise enough to know when he's hurting other people. Sigh ... I just love any Jim, really! *g*

modernthirst January 12 2007, 19:44:35 UTC

I like that Pamalama says she loved him then. Ohhhhh HURRY February sweeps! They've got to give us something then, right?

bellalumina January 12 2007, 20:50:38 UTC

God, I hope so! At least last night's episode helped lay the groundwork for some Jim/Pam goodness...

Thanks for the feedback! :)

austin360 January 13 2007, 03:45:43 UTC

Have I told you lately how glad I am that you're writing Office fic now? Cause I am. And this was awesome.

bellalumina January 13 2007, 05:02:01 UTC

I feel like I need a Pam icon that says "Hey" to properly reply, LOL!

I'm glad that you're liking what I'm posting! :) All of these 500-word fics have been awesome confidence builders for me in this fandom. I feel like I'm finally getting their voices...

allibabab January 15 2007, 16:35:57 UTC

This is so awesome -- you've done such a nice job with their voices and their characterizations, even with only 500 words to work with. Lovely, lovely job here. :)

bellalumina January 19 2007, 23:26:36 UTC

Thank you! It's so awesome to hear that I've gotten their voices down, because that's still what I'm most worried about with Jim and Pam.