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Dec 27, 2010 16:46

Title: Officer Down!
Author: Becky_H
Characters: Hotch-centric. Morgan, Reid.
Genre: Gen, H/c.
Rating: R
Word Count: 2,000
Warnings: Violence and gore. Ambiguous ending.
Summary: Shots fired, officer down.
Author’s Notes: This was my Christmas present to myself. Unapologetic sadism toward fake people and Hotch-Reid Hurt/Comfort.
( Being shot is more about surprise than pain, at least at first. It’s a hard, precise shove that knocks you back or sideways or down. Even if you’re in the middle of a shoot-out, dodging bullets, it’s always unexpected and shocking. )

fic, criminal minds

Comments 46

maldeluxx December 27 2010, 22:33:33 UTC

This is really intense, I love it. :)

becky_writing December 27 2010, 22:35:57 UTC

That that was my Christmas gift to myself probably says more about *my* psychology (or opinions of Holidays) than I want to admit.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

maldeluxx December 27 2010, 23:15:18 UTC

It could say something about mine, too, just based on how much I liked it *lol* ;)

donutsweeper December 27 2010, 22:44:33 UTC

GAH HOW CAN YOU END IT THERE!!!!!!! YOU EVIL EVIL EVIL WOMAN

(aka loved it!!)

becky_writing December 27 2010, 22:45:06 UTC

(I actually cut out the last 500 words of fic TO end it there. Because I'm mean)

Thank you!

lucianwolf December 27 2010, 23:37:03 UTC

Hey! No, no, NO! You finish this RIGHT NOW, young lady! :D

This reads like the first chapter of a deliciously long story. It's REALLY good, and I hope you continue it.

becky_writing December 28 2010, 00:05:54 UTC

might. We'll see how the character's cooperate. I know where it's going, regardless, so. Well, we'll see.

THANK YOU

...I am having log in fail. I'm sorry. Stupid RP journals.

daylyn December 27 2010, 23:39:53 UTC

Ack! The ending! Ack!!!!!

I loved this. I loved how both Morgan and Reid reacted and how they treated Hotch. You could sense the worry through their apparent calmness. Aaron hanging on and struggling is also so heartwrenching. I too really like the intensity of this fic. Great job.

becky_writing December 28 2010, 00:04:24 UTC

*laughs*

Thank you! Yeah, I can see that 'silent panic' thing going on and it was honestly a lot of fun to torture everyone for my fun. I'm glad it was 'fun' for you too.

(RP journal fail. Sorry.)

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becky_writing December 27 2010, 23:52:06 UTC

Thanks! It was FUN.