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[becky_writing]

Title: Steadfast
Author: becky_h
Characters: Hotch/Reid
Rating: R (warnings for ick)
Word Count: 100
Prompter/Prompt: maldeluxx
You can make me cry You have a right
I can see you live I can't forget you die

Comments

[maldeluxx]

Oh, this is perfect! :D Everything 'nailed down' in the moment *grins*

(though I think it should be 'cry', but that's just a minor thing... perfection in everything else *hugs*)

[becky_writing]

...You're right, I redid that sentence and left the previous -ing. Oops! And thank you!

[maldeluxx]

I do get a little nervous pointing out little things like these. I know that my own English writings needs a grammar-beta. But still, just one is very good - I don't like to comment on fics that have more (then again I don't come across those that often). ::) *hugs*

[becky_writing]

I have MAJOR issues when I work without a beta - especially at the speed I did most of these. I will promise you, though - I have never, ever, bitten anyone (or even gotten upset) for someone pointing out a technical error to me. I make them a lot, things slip through, and I know the intent is to help the piece be better; Criticizing my writing, even HARSHLY, is not the same as tearing at me. It sucks that people have a hard time with that, because yeah. It makes me very wary of commenting, too.