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Good Thing We're Packing

Feb 07, 2011 20:09

Title: Good Thing We’re Packing
Characters: Donna, Shaun, Alex (OC)
Summary: Donna finds one last wedding present while packing.
Word Count: ~1,200
Prompt/Notes: Written for Travellers’ Tales Prompt #7 (gather) at doctor_donna. I should also point out that, while writing this, I happened to update my f-list and prompt #31 (immaculate) had just been posted. I’m ( Read more... )

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Comments 7

heintz57 February 8 2011, 04:35:12 UTC

Got to love the lottery man what I wouldn't do with so much dough. Oh well I guess I will just have to live like the rest of us.

doctorsgirl26 February 9 2011, 01:10:16 UTC

awwww! They are just so CUTE! You know I love this but I'll tell you again! I love it! *gives your muse presents and gives Maddie hugs because she is a good girl*

bas_math_girl February 9 2011, 17:44:34 UTC

I've come by to add my love for this as well. :D

thenoblethang February 27 2011, 06:08:47 UTC

*squeals with Donna & Shaun* :DD

adriana_divolpe February 27 2011, 06:40:23 UTC

I really love this. It's SO cute; I really like the idea of the scene where they find out they've won the lottery, and you've done it brilliantly.

This line

It had come off the gift from her grandfather, she was almost sure of it. He’d been so proud of his wrapping job she didn’t have the heart to tell him he’d tied the bow wrong.

made me tear up a bit. I'm not quite sure why; I've been tearing up at funny things lately. But I really like that line.

The whole story is very cute, and Shaun is so sweet.