in the dark

[bbyah]

Title: in the dark
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Homin
Genre: AU
Summary: Some people light a fire under you. Some people just want to watch you burn. As usual, Yunho is drawn to a flame.

Comments

[haeym]

ohh, i liked this a whole lot. a lot lot. very graceful and you seem to write with a such ease, it's always so pleasant to read no matter how heavy the subject is. i don't know if writing comes easy to you but the outcome seems very flowing yet not overly detailed. the imagery you created was gorgeous and very well balanced with the overall story.

i really liked the fact that you made yunho afraid of the darkness. such, i don't know, i just found it really lovely. so basically yes loved the whole changmin being his light in the dark bit so damn much. thank you for writing, will definitely reread soon if not tonight. (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)

[bbyah]

ahh that means a lot coming from you! writing's not exactly easy, but if you ignore it too long, the words will just take over your body and force you to tell the story :|;; I'm glad this worked though! halfway through I realized I know next to nothing about arson, hahaha;;

and yes, fear of the dark just popped up on it's own, and it fit so well!
I'm glad you enjoyed it \o/!

[haeym]

i feel you, i feel you. writing is really hard but when the right mood hits, you just need to get the words on paper. (or on computer in this case) also about the arson thing, i have exactly the same problem with a couple of things i'd like to write (AUs like hannibal, victorian england and some psychological stuff) but i'm afraid i get things wrong because i'm not an expert in those fields ahahha ;; i think you did a great job with arson tho :>

[bbyah]

something that makes me feel a little better is something I heard: most sci-fi is a basic, loose concept of science combined with a lot of drama. The drama helps most of your readers connect, rather than forcing them to focus on the details of the science...of course, research is necessary too, but I think people are pretty forgiving as long as there's a show :>

in short, write that hannibal AU PLEASE bahaha

[snow_meow]

I am glad that they both found a place to belong and fit in.
The best part is they found someone to be by their side who understands them.

[bbyah]

yes, any story that ends with fitting together is a happy ending! I'm glad you liked it :>!

[lyeon]

hello! i really liked the feel of this piece, it left some really vivid images in my head. one of them is of changmin standing with that red popsicle in his mouth by the swimming pool where everything is super bright and saturated under the sun, where yunho is tanned and barefoot wearing sunglasses a singlet and shorts aha ha haaaaa

[bbyah]

thank you for the lovely feedback! yes, I definitely knew I wanted to write about some of the scenes just from picturing them...especially the dandelions, I found a yard full of them and knew it was going to show up in this!

I am a sucker for fandom references ;;; and if changmin ever sings light em up, I can die happily .__.;
I'm glad you enjoyed it \o/

[sulking_angel]

Wow i got so happy to see an update from you! I love your style and your plots, theyre so different and interesting. The thought of homin lighting things on fire is hotter than it should be lol.
I really like the convo between them when changmin says theyre bad for each other. Even tho their words are kinda mean, theyre canceled out by the sweet and tender way they handle each other. Thank you for sharing! Hope to read more from you soon ^^

[bbyah]

hahaha, trust me, I was wondering why homin in an arson AU was so appealing...then I just decided to run with it .__.
and yes, they have a great dynamic...sometimes it's hard to capture;;
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :>

[9ine_lives]

Spoto! (〜￣▽￣)〜