Midnight Season (IV)

[bbyah]

Title: The Midnight Season
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Homin
Genre: AU, Pseudo-Victorian Era
Summary: There's nothing pretty about this love story. A sickness is spreading through the city, in more ways than one. It's a bad season for growing.

Comments

[trish3815]

I am so glad that Yunho found him.. there is no telling what would have happen to Changmin if he had not shown up.. back in the city..glad the Kyuhyun was a big help and finding out his trusted Professor is not so trusting.. love how Yunho lets into Junsu.. he knows what is important to him that is why he killed that man because of his sister.. cannot wait for the ending.. hopefully by then they will have admitted to wanting each other.. thanks!!

[bbyah]

thank you~! almost to the end \o/

[yunhominji94]

Omg an update yay~ It's so fucking late over here I'm so sleep deprived so this comment will probably be short but baby like I've said before I absolutely LOVE your stories! They always get me hooked and sorry I didn't comment on this one sooner I was away from LJ for awhile but I'm caught up and damn I'm loving the characters and storyline and just everything. I promise to leave a better comment next time but my eyes are like drooping as I type this out. XD;; I'm loving the relationship between Yunho and Changmin and how conflicted Yunho is but he still acts upon his feelings was flirting and even did stuff with Changmin. I was like lmao omg Jung. And Changmin just taking it all in stride. That professor I knew he was bad. I had a feeling and JYJ why do I feel you always put them as the bad guys. Especially bad guys who are against Changmin? XD I just wanted to point that out. Like they're pretty fucked up but idk... You make me conflicted with JYJ in your stories. >o< And lol Kyuhyun when he saw Changmin and then Yunho who btw I see

[bbyah]

thank youuu~! I totally understand, I'm actually having a weird internet situation, so I feel you .__.;; get more sleep!
and yeah, I actually love writing JYJ as the opposing force...not necessarily bad, but no longer aligning with the same side. I think they're complicated in character, and complications make for excellent stories!

[yunhominji94]

You're welcome~ And ah you're having Internet problems? I hope that gets fixed soon. *pats* Lol I will get more sleep I was just so hooked on your story I was like I gotta see this through. *feels like death itself* Well I LOVE your stories and I adore how you write JYJ in them so I was just curious to know why you do that but I see your reasoning now and it makes sense. It's very true that most definitely their complicated characters make for a better story. Can't wait for your next update. ^_^

[bbyah]

My main character models for JYJ are cats. I just think, "what would cats do here," and voila, I have my next plot development ahahaha;;

[rennie_88]

woah..this chapter so was packed full of so much action i cantt even get my head around it to form a coherent reply!! @.@ but loving the way homin is developing..the teasing and flirting and scandalous interactions you cut out of the scene so we can only guess at what happened lol XD but love how deep each of their characters go, with very well defined unique beliefs that contrast with each other and make them bump up against each other even as their main central beliefs somehow coincide so that they understand each other slowly. its so fascinating how u did this and i love it each time they get in a discussion or some of their true heart comes out. its even better that the more it happens, the more they like each other and realize they didn't kno who each other really was very well.. we''re learning along with them and its making me fall in love with them as they fall in love with each other..if that makes any sense?/ XDD haha

[bbyah]

thank you! I was thinking about drawing the scandalous~ scene out...then I cut it off. .__. I would smash my screen in if I was reading this and it skipped over, ahahaha;; I guess I should think about everyone reading this a bit more. ah well!
almost doneee! \o/

[cactuzoz]

as expected, yunho was not some heartless bastard who will leave changmin without a reason~
and really love the silent communications between yunho and boa,lmao~ jung always the sappy one~

but really tho, it was kind of sickening (and a bit of surprising) when the truth about the spread of the disease was found out.
What was the motive? what was the craziness that lead to all of that? has someone went bonkers?

and shim's deduction of jung's sexual orientation was amusing and the 'smut' (ok, kind of) was surprisingly satisfying for me~

anyway~ love how jung became as fierce and as intimidating he could be (even with all of his kindness he obviously had that side of him that i love,eheh). and obviously, the plot thickens and i am left with awe at how this story has turned into ^ ^

so thank you again for this chapter dear~ cannot wait for the next~~~!!

[bbyah]

thankkk you! yes, I think several people have lost their minds, but there's a happy ending...sort of. :> (I swear, next time I'll try not to speed through the steamy stuff ;;)

[buzbean]

so yunho's been busy reasoning with himself haha it's so like him
glad he decided to come back for changminnie
now i'm waiting for Minnie to save the world

[bbyah]

thank you! Yunho always thinks a bit too much, hahaha. save the world- maybe; save the city- absolutely!