Comments | bana05: Holiday Gift Fic: Dessert

bana05

Holiday Gift Fic: Dessert

Dec 31, 2007 23:45

She was all soft and sable skin, the dark chocolate of it a beautiful contrast to the cream silk sheet draped over her. The line of her spine was graceful, tantalizing, and he couldn’t help but drag his finger over every vertebra until he reached the small of her back. Her bum was hidden by the sheet, but he knew it was bare, just like the rest of ( Read more... )

fic request, fic, doctor who, holiday, gifts, writing

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bana05 January 1 2008, 05:24:25 UTC

You're welcome :) Happy New Year!

jo_mako January 1 2008, 04:52:10 UTC

damn that took care of me being cold from being outside for the last hour or so! Damn that was good and hawt! Bravo dude!

bana05 January 1 2008, 04:59:41 UTC

:) Thank you! :) Happy New Year!

malaleen January 1 2008, 05:13:07 UTC

Such a lovely treat to read on this last day of 2007. Loved it!

bana05 January 1 2008, 05:26:46 UTC

Thank you very much! Have a very happy New Year!

stoplookingup January 1 2008, 06:26:19 UTC

*sigh* Sweet and spicy. Delicious. Happy New Year.

bana05 January 1 2008, 10:21:57 UTC

Thank you so much! Have a Happy New Year yourself! :)

persiflage_1 January 1 2008, 07:59:03 UTC

Of course, since it's a sequel of sorts, I had to go back and re-read "my" fic first (oh what a chore that was ! *giggles*) - and then this... Which is hawt and sexy and gorgeous - like these two...

*BIG HUGS*

(Just one tiny typo: She was supposed to learn from her; he was supposed to earn his title of Doctor in her eyes. - should be "learn from him" yes?)

bana05 January 1 2008, 10:26:00 UTC

Yeah, I caught that, but my connection is too slow for me to bother with editing it right now, but thanks for the heads up anyway!

persiflage_1 January 1 2008, 10:29:50 UTC

OK doke then !!

*goes away to re-read*

bana05 January 1 2008, 10:43:18 UTC

:)! *eyes dialup* It should be fixed later on today (tonight for you).

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