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bakagreenirene

Realization Chapter 3

Dec 28, 2010 19:10

Disclaimer: Just for this section only, it has a rating of R (not that you guys mind right? ^^)

( Jaejoong turned the page of his book, waiting in eager excitement for the revealing of the killer in his mystery novel... )

realization, yunjae

Comments 11

inukag0 January 23 2011, 17:16:01 UTC

my gosh...jae's wet dream=^u^ LOOOOOVVEEEE!!!
jaejoong is so stubborn,isn't it obvious he likes yunho???duhhh hahaha
BooJae's fourth dimension...i should be there observing his yunaje fantasies!X3

samunin January 31 2011, 05:24:18 UTC

Nice dream jaejae! Guess he hasn't realized he has feelings for yunho or he's in denial and doesn't want to acknowledge it

thefangirlreads February 5 2011, 08:26:39 UTC

"It had been 10 minutes since they had stopped practicing yet his heart was still beating so hard."

I like how you ended this chapter with that sentence. Well-written. :)

Anyway, hi! I'm Ren ^^ Just started reading this fic this afternoon.. and I feel that I'm gonna continue 'til the latest chap. xD I'll comment again after~

hang_la July 12 2011, 04:41:33 UTC

Hi I've just begun reading ur fic, and it is soooooooo deliciously good i'mma finish the rest in one go xD!