The End.

[sacrificedalice]

Sorry for spamming, but this needs to be shared. Now I've read some bad fic in my time, but this one may have just finished me off.

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[mprice]

This post violates Rule #1. Mocking the author. Please remove author's name from post.

[sacrificedalice]

Oops, sorry. I'll do that now.

[nin_of_eden]

'it'll just be more awkward if we try to talk to them now don't you think?'

...Yes, I think it probably would. o_@

[rouge_angle]

Oh YAMI? Ugh, terrible fangirl Japanese is terrible.

I'm not even involved with the Bleach fandom anymore, but I can feel your pain.

[kari_izumi]

I have a feeling this author is a YuGiOh fan, because I've never seen that word ourside fo fandom (which you're right, it's incorrect, because the word "yami" means "darkness"). Maybe they meant to say "Kam."

Still, sucky fic is sucky.

[rouge_angle]

I had imagined so. The YuGiOh fandom is absolutely riddled with such "authors".

"Oh DARKNESS~!" *snerk* Yeah, they probably meant Kami.

In my first post I was too busy facepalming to take note of the end section of the spork, which is wrong on SO many levels. *gag*

[veraliana]

The comments about each other's dads at the end. What? And in Ichigo's room. Why?

My darkness, this is terrible.

[kari_izumi]

"If we do get back together they become stepbrothers, if they get together, we become in laws, it's taboo!"

There's a manga for that. ;)

"And honey," Ichigo started, "this is so wrong, but why was I actually turned on seeing that? I got a better look at your dad than I wanted to, and…..truth be told, I wouldn't mind you looking like THAT when you're his age."

"Why did you have to put it like that? I don't want to think about THAT about my dad! But….truth be told….I was thinking the same when I saw your dad.""

ROFLCOPTERS, where does one even start with that?! O_O