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Feb 12, 2009 23:30

Ooh~ la la! Never in my wildest (and wettest) dreams did I ever think this kink meme would yield such passionate results! With nearly five thousand comments in the initial post, I figured it was high time we bring the naked party over into a new post to leave the first open for request followup and... other forms of fulfillment ( Read more... )

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Re: Boy oh boy anonymous February 13 2009, 16:26:38 UTC
...oh, I like this.

I'll come up with a fill by the afternoon! (But I also want to see someone else's take)

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Boys and Girls (1/?) anonymous February 13 2009, 21:16:54 UTC
(This could be a long one...sorry, OP)

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Kanji's been thinking far too much these last few days. It's out of character.

They pulled Naoto out the dungeon late, and he - she - still isn't back at school. Chie told him it was the same when they rescued Yukiko; it was the first time and they didn't know what they were doing, so they took longer. More time you're in there, the more messed up you get.

Shouldn't have taken nearly as long to get Naoto - they've done this a bunch of times now - but they had almost nothing to go on. Total enigma. Of course, Kanji never let on that he knew a little more about the guy than most, but "oh yeah, he sucked me off in a park" probably wouldn't have helped Rise find him. Or her. Definitely wouldn't have helped, come to think of it, because it turns out Kanji didn't know a damn thing about Naoto ( ... )

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Boys and Girls (2/?) anonymous February 13 2009, 21:19:53 UTC
Wasn't long afterwards that Naoto got himself kidnapped on purpose; simultaneously the smartest and dumbest thing Kanji's ever known anyone to do. And he wishes he could straighten out the pronouns in his head, because reconciling Naoto the boy with Naoto the girl is starting to piss him off.

He reaches to close the blinds on the window - but a figure in the street catches his eye. Whoever they are they're stupid enough to walk around in the rain without a coat, just a hat instead, and - oh shit.Kanji scrambles for the light switch - maybe he can just pretend he's asleep - but he stumbles and smacks his leg hard into the sewing table. "Fuck ( ... )

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Boys and Girls (3/3) anonymous February 13 2009, 21:30:08 UTC
"I...shit, I don't know, alright?" He slams his hand down on the counter - then immediately regrets it. Last thing he wants is to wake up his mother and explain why that nice detective boy's dripping rainwater all over her store ( ... )

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anonymous February 13 2009, 23:51:38 UTC
That was so adorable. ;; Love the stream-of-consciousness with Kanji, hits the character right on. Great job!!

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Re: Boys and Girls (3/3) anonymous February 14 2009, 03:03:38 UTC
Thank you for writing this! (I like the very in character Naoto who's kinda screwed up herself and not at all hearts and flowers and a Kanji who understands completely.) It's strange that I'm taken more by the conversation and feelings than the actual sexing, but this was the exception.

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Boys and Girls (writer!anon note) anonymous February 13 2009, 21:31:18 UTC
I am not the anon who wrote this:
http://badbadbathhouse.livejournal.com/736.html?thread=120288#t120288

but I definitely took some inspiration from it! Much credit to the writer.

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OP anonymous February 14 2009, 04:50:32 UTC
This is EXACTLY what I was thinking when I made this request, thank you so much! It was perfect :)

btw, I was totally thinking of that fic you linked when I read that part about the blowjob against the tree.

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