Nozomi/Tomomori photoshoot, Fic: Peek-A-Boo [Marui, Niou]

[axtar]

There are two points to this post:

[1] Thank you soooo much to carneaglariel and futomimii for inviting me to help out with their Nozomi/Tomomori (Harutoki 3) photoshoot today and to raincloud_sama, yuncyn, _kazeki_ and Bunny-chan for coming as well and making the whole thing great ^o

Comments

[aiwritingfic]

Whalau, long. O_o *saves for later, too late now, bed*

[axtar]

If it were 5k words long, I'd totally be tempted to use this for Subrosa, lame or not. >DDDDD

[aiwritingfic]

No idea how good this is since I need bed now. <3 nn!

[axtar]

*shoos you off to bed*

[shikanashi_kk]

I just love the ending. <3 It was a little hard to understand at first, but when I did, I was all giddy. Very, very lovely. :D I can't stop but read the words over and over again, because how you wrote this is simply just love.

"I guess you can’t play tennis huh? Good - I’ll be able to slam a few tennis balls through you then."

That line there is so full of win. xDD

[axtar]

*grins at the icon* Interesting message!

And thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Snarky Marui is love.

[chineseathena]

That was amazing! I'm totally a Platinum pair person, but this was just great. I could FEEL how messed up Marui was feeling, it was that well-written. And I loved that one line: "Studying his teammate, he wonders how it must be, where you are supposed to be comatose in a bed somewhere but aren’t, knowing no one can hear you or see you no matter how loud you scream and only you are left with the echoes."

*shivers*

[axtar]

Thank you! ^___^ I'm glad you liked it. Originally, it was supposed to run more along the lines of slapstick crack, but well...*points at above* it turned out as anything but.

[iyori]

This fic is some parts disturbing and some parts fuzzy and all parts awesome, HOW DO YOU DO IT AX LET ME IN ON YOUR SECRET

*Pats Yagyuu ):*

[axtar]

I WISH I KNEW MYSELF: IT RAN AWAY FROM ME THE MINUTE I STARTED LEARNING THE MEANING OF PRONOUNS. D8

Honestly, I (sadistically) like the Yagyuu part - it was the most fun(??) to write, though I still shudder internally at the lack-of-leg bit.

[yuncyn]

STALKAH NIOU

*grins* This is as excellent as I remember it first being told. It's still heartbreaking how Marui's the "only one left who sees him". Not even Yagyuu (who's in serious need of a hug by the way T____T)

But, y'know, this line always gets me:

"And as the two of them walk away from the small playground, Niou walks beside Marui, neither three steps ahead nor three steps behind."

♥ Absolutely marvelous.

[axtar]

TOTALLY YO, ONLY IN THE WRONG SORT OF WAY

You know my favorite line is totally "Man, Marui-sempai, you suck.” 8DDD Nothing like Kiri-snark in the world.

That and Yagyuu losing a leg, but you'd probably kick me for that. >D