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Jul 25, 2011 19:50

 Ryden, PG, 1081 words. About how two people can mix and separate and mix and separate. First Ryden ever written, please tell me what I'm doing wrong, how cliche the plot is, how bad I write, etc.

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missmazzers July 26 2011, 01:37:10 UTC
omg this was fucking perfect
this was the fic I was waiting for
the one I've always wanted to read
and you did it so perfectly
this is the story I've always been looking for
every fic I read I always want it to be this one, but it never is
but then you wrote this
and it was wonderful
you have a great writing style
and you wrote it so that we would assume things ourselves and it was beautiful
you just did this so fucking amazingly
I can't believe I found my soul mate if a fic could be my soul mate
lol but this just made me so happy
omg thank you

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atl17 July 27 2011, 08:43:17 UTC
oh wow this was the nicest thing anyone's every said to me, thank you walksjakg. this was my first like fic i've ever properly written and didn't hate, so thank you! this really means so much to me. it's what i was looking for too, since no one wrote it i just decided to do it myself.

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