Tell and Don't Tell poetry by ariadnechan (2/3)

[ariadnechan]

Author: ariadnechan
Rating: PG
Pairing: Tsubasa - Kurogane/Fai, implicit Sakura/Syaoran in this only poem.
Disclaimer/Credit/Resources: Post Tokyo Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle by Clamp
Challenge: 138 cover here
Category: Poetry (2/3)
Title: Tell and don’t tell
Theme: table 2- "fear"
Beta: laifanSummary: Fay point of view Poem, he talks to Sakura about his feeling

Comments

[mystofthestars]

His red eyes cutting my heart like my teeth his flesh I loved this sentence... ♥

(and loved also the first part of this poetry, too *_*)

[ariadnechan]

thank you!!!!

[smakn]

I love how you wrote this. The metaphors are really great and...some of these sentences are just amazing.

I think you did a good j ob with this poem.

♥

[ariadnechan]

thanks!!! is god to know you like it!!!

Gran trabajo

[ext_125432]

Me gusta como armas la prosa de tus poemas, son enormes en sus líneas más invisibles. me encantan por lo que dicen y por lo que no...

Re: Gran trabajo

[ariadnechan]

hi espero verte más por aquí