KuroxFay Poem for the winter challenge

Mar 14, 2008 02:29

Title: Memento
Author: ariadnechan
Pairing: Kuro x Fay
Rating: Pg-13
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer : I don't own tsubasa characters are from Clamp and either the Movie Memento.
Author's Notes: thanks to iambickilometer for be my beta *hearts*
Summary: "The last picture in the back of his mind

Was her, with no movement, with no breath"

Memento )

poetry

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valentines_av March 14 2008, 09:33:37 UTC
... *dies*
That was... amazing.
I really don't know how else to put it.

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ariadnechan March 14 2008, 13:55:44 UTC
ohh thank you very much!!!

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valentines_av March 15 2008, 09:04:32 UTC
You're more than welcome! ^__^

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ariadnechan March 15 2008, 12:43:03 UTC
wow i love your icon!!!!

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ariadnechan March 15 2008, 12:44:08 UTC
thanks for reading it!!!

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snowaltz March 16 2008, 14:15:34 UTC
And says, “He is Fay, and he is your lover

Your love, the last and everything, ever"

These 2 lines are just wow. They are my favourite lines. Emotional, impactful and they rhymes.

I've got a question though, who is the man with black shiny hair?

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ariadnechan March 16 2008, 16:45:33 UTC
Ashura hehehehehe it seems to me as a good evil guy he did it well in Celes and fay tells Kuro is for that they must die

you kill my father phrase

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snowaltz March 16 2008, 16:54:47 UTC
Oh ya! Pardon me, I'm too tired and sleepy for Ashura's shiny hair to charm me..

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ariadnechan March 16 2008, 17:21:23 UTC
don't worry maybe i wasn't sp clear enough
and thank you for reading me even my fclet for some reason i'm better with poems than fics, but i'll improve i try my best!!

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lingou April 2 2008, 03:38:33 UTC
WAAAH so pretty!!! I wish I could write like youuuu~~~ ;______;
Congrats on winning~ it's very well-deserved! <3 <3 *huggle*
Keep up the wonderful, beautiful work!

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ariadnechan April 2 2008, 16:11:41 UTC
Ohh thanks for reading me!!

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lingou April 2 2008, 17:20:23 UTC
You're welcome!!! :3 keep posting~ <3 am I gonna get to see you again in the spring challenge?? pleeeeeeaaaase??

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