Fic: Hawaii Five-0: Steve/Danny "Better Than Pancakes"

[archet]

Title: Better Than Pancakes

Comments

[sexycazzy]

Really love this and the style of writing is good too, esp for a long fic - dialogue is normally a drabble or a few words but it works in this case cos this way I can think up of images of Steve/Danny in my mind...esp...on that kitchen table *giggle*

Awesome!

[archet]

Thanks so much for letting me know you liked this! It was a lot of fun to write (and imagine *g*). In many ways I found writing this dialogue only fic easier than another of fic, though I sometimes struggle with Steve's 'voice'. Thanks for reading!

[navyvet90]

I concur: This was awesome. Lots of snappy dialogue, which was fun to read. It was funny, sweet and just so them! Kudos!

[archet]

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed this, and it was as much fun to read as it was to write. Thanks for reading and commenting ;)

[theeverdream]

Aww, so like Steve to want to take Danny out in the car because of stuff with his dad and all. :)

[archet]

I felt like it would be something he would want to share with Danny. Thanks for reading!

[archet]

Thank you! It was a lot of fun for me, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I must say that I think I'm as in love with these two as I ever was Aragorn/Boromir, or Viggo/Sean. They really make me want to write, ;)