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Nov 21, 2012 16:44

NaNo

Chapter Twenty-Five: A falling-out among thieves
Chapter Twenty-Six: Amends
password: blackmagic
wordcount: 101,000
status: complete.

Feedback and criticism appreciated: if you have critique more specific than "this is shit" (stuff like "you lost your grip on character voice at one point", "pacing went a bit wonk in places" or "didn't actually understand what was happening here"), please make a note of the chapter so I can stick it in the edit notes file?

Poetry

living euphorically in the moment in a room full of ghosts

PAIN ENDLESS PAIN PAIN THAT WAKES ME UP IN THE NIGHT WHEN I WAS SLEEPING PERFECTLY HAPPILY PAIN THAT I HAVE TO TAKE A CONTINUAL CONVEYOR BELT OF PILLS FOR PAIN WHICH WON'T FUCKING LET ME THINK OR SLEEP OR EAT OR DO ANYTHING EXCEPT CRY AND RAGE ABOUT HOW MUCH I DON'T WANT IT PAIN PAIN PAIN PAIN ALL THE TIME PAIN

I am not a fun person to talk to right now.

undignified begging for praise, nano, links, writing, poetry, obsessive word-counting, do my work for me, brown bread boys, fic, anticlimax is anticlimatic

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