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[apiphile]

Poetry

Clumsy Fingers
But nothing kills rage

Jewellery

Comments

[wolfy_writing]

I'm going to be milking the "Sorry, studying Vietnamese" thing until late July, so sorry, studying Vietnamese.

Considering that Fifty Shades of Gray is a mega-bestseller, your porn, if anything, is likely to suffer from an excess of quality and characterization.

Is that a statue? It's very well-drawn!

[apiphile]

Hahah well check out what I said to ms chess. :)

It also has a plot and reasons for people doing things, which is WILD AND UNHEARD-OF. Although admittedly the narrator's main motivation for basically everything is "greed, cowardice, and occasionally love".

It's a faun apparently carved by Barberini. I just love the way he's like YO CHECK MY PLUMS.

[wolfy_writing]

Good plan! I'm totally up for that. (July 24th is the final exam for Vietnamese.)

This may be dangerously close to crossing the line between "Porn" and "A good book with some sex scenes in it".

[chess]

I can probably help out with editing, although I reserve the right to be a massive flake and leave it lying around my inbox forever as usual...

[apiphile]

Let's do a deal - I'll send it to you, if you're not finished by the time I get back from Australia (say, late July), I'll ask amy_wolf to do it instead? How does that sound?

[chess]

Sounds like a plan :-)

[swear_jar]

MOTHERFUCKING SECOND DRAFT WHOOOOO

[pospreterito]

ANY TAKERS? Basically you get to go through a book going "Fuck that bit, but keep that bit".

if you still need this, or if you want a shouty incoherent ~critical~ eye for some other purpose, um, *waves?* (i'm sure i'll regret that very soon, school starts in a couple weeks and i'm drowning in college fuckery, but WHAT THE HELL.)

[apiphile]

Yes please. Should I just sling the email your way ASAP?

[pospreterito]

have the everpresent warning that depending on what my brain and surroundings are doing it might take me a bit to get to in mind, but -- sure!

[apiphile]

As long as it HAPPENS. I really need someone else's input at this stage, you see.