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Aug 15, 2009 22:40

Title: Garden of Unearthly Delights and Minor Fuck-ups
Recipient: shadow_hive
Fandom: The Used
Word Count: 7,537
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: GSF
Warnings: Sensory deprivation, CBT, spanking, GSF
Disclaimer: This almost certainly didn't happen IRL.
Note: Author's opinions may differ from characters. Shitty writing is shitty! Betaing and exasperated yells from channonyarrow

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intothenightx August 16 2009, 16:41:19 UTC
It's porn, it doesnt have to be grand!

This is pretty fucking grand for being porn though, I have to say! The boys taking care of their Jepha, making sure he his kept and fed properly. I am never ever not overly fucking fond of that.

It probably should be strange that I'm heartclutching over porn, but I'm learning to ignore that feeling. *more heartclutches*

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apiphile August 16 2009, 16:42:51 UTC
That is basically my favourite trope with The Used - they're dicks and they're boys and they behave like tards, but in the end they take care of each others' needs, no matter how weird those needs are.

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intothenightx August 16 2009, 16:46:08 UTC
Ohhhh yes, me tooo. Bert will always have someone to snot on and Dan will have people to sing strange songs with and Quinn will always have people who understand what the hell he's saying and Jepha will have all the sex he ever needs. Perfect.

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apiphile August 16 2009, 16:53:26 UTC
such an appropriate icon. Yes. They complete their own circuit.

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strangefrontier August 16 2009, 16:58:29 UTC
"Nicer than thaaaaat," Bert sing-songs.

ILU.

I really like the tone - flippant's not quite the right word for it, but it's something along those lines. (... Am heavily medicated.)

Also: GUH, PORN. ♥

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apiphile August 16 2009, 17:04:26 UTC
IDK about anyone else, but the songs - or just music in general - find their way into bandom fics very readily.

Poor poorly Holly. *tucks you up in bed* The other fic I posted today is probably just right for you at the moment. ;) But you should read Jess & Rose's first to make you laugh and swoon.

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strangefrontier August 16 2009, 18:14:27 UTC
I do like inclusion of lyric snippets and song titles, either knowingly sung or just deftly slipped into the prose. I think it's the bandom equivalent of fics including scenes or dialogue that echo or mirror bits from canon, a wee fanfic technique I adore.

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apiphile August 16 2009, 18:16:22 UTC
Me too, anything that brings fic closer to canon is great (I will never be good enough to have the rhythm/structure of a fic echo that of a song, but it is one of my great goals in life to be able to get the content and structure of something to align with a good piece of storytelling-music).

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llamapi August 18 2009, 03:42:08 UTC
IT'S STILL GAY EVEN IF YOU DO IT THROUGH A PILLOWCASE.

(BAHAHAAA what were they on, Loveline or some shit? And I forget who said that. DOESN'T MATTER. POINT IS, YOU WROTE FIC WHERE THEY DO IT THROUGH A PILLOWCASE = YOU WIN AT THE GAME OF "DELIGHT ME FOR OBSCURE REASONS" THAT YOU DIDN'T KNOW WE WERE PLAYING. BRAVO!)

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apiphile August 18 2009, 06:26:18 UTC
I'm still superpissed at this fic for being so fucking clunking and awful, bth. I feel like there's no way I karmically deserved your comic. BUT I'M PRETTY GLAD I GOT IT OKAY.

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llamapi August 18 2009, 18:02:47 UTC
What the fuck ever it is consistently a joy to spend time with a Quinn of your imagining, is how I see it.

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apiphile August 19 2009, 10:06:53 UTC
I do adore the way you draw him, btw, Quinn's scraggly beard and ANGRY EYEBROWS are like a logo. :D QUINNFAAAAAAACE.

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delphinapterus August 18 2009, 17:01:28 UTC
I really adore how the title plays off the Hieronymus Bosch's triptych. Very hot and I really love how Jepha is so irritated by all the posturing at the clubs.

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apiphile August 19 2009, 09:56:40 UTC
Thank you!

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eleanor_lavish August 19 2009, 23:17:43 UTC
THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING, GOD DAMN IT. You have them all down SO PERFECTLY, and FUCK, man, I love this a lot. A LOT. THE BANTER! THE GIGGLING! THE INCREDIBLE HOTNESS OF LIVE PORN!

Jesus fuck, if this isn't what life among The Used actually is, I don't want to know.

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apiphile August 20 2009, 10:12:43 UTC
Oh man, in my head this is exactly what life among the Used is like. <3 I'm glad you agree!

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