Thank you! It's a fun little verse to tinker with: free of all the angst and Big Serious Themes of the T&P verse. So I think I will visit these two again and see what they get up to next...
ok the only thing i would change is the end of #1, BSDM should be BDSM. that is the sum total of my critique, after (many) re-reads & much thought. *snerk* this is a beautiful/sexy/hot/kinky/loving/sweet story, with major room for additions. (yay!)
I'm really looking forward to the conversation with Riley! This is such a fun read and Dom!Buffy is usually not something I read, so excellent job in making me read something I usually wouldn't - and I loved it!
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*dissolves into a puddle*
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You do know it's the middle of the day here and now I'm all hot and bothered?
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*runs away*
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And this story is easily in my top 10 B/G, so I don't think you have anything to worry about.
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this is a beautiful/sexy/hot/kinky/loving/sweet story, with major room for additions. (yay!)
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