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[anonfeedback]

☃ ❄ END OF YEAR FEEDBACK MEME ❄ ☃
adapted from here.
Time to spread some holiday cheer in the form of feedback for authors!

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[anonfeedback]

thanks anon n__n

[alaeaureae]

alaeaureae @ todokanu

my masterlist hasn't been updated in a while and i haven't written much, but i would still appreciate any crit that you may have! thank you!

[alaeaureae]

you write so beautifully yet there's a distance between your narration and the reader. i don't know if it's intentional ???

[anticommute]

no it's not D: "it's like [you're] watching through a sheet of glass" right? is what someone said to me a long time ago. thank you though! i don't know how to fix it DDDDDDD: i don't suppose you'd have any tips?

[alaeaureae]

I love your yixing fics. ;A; It's one of those fics that made me realize that yixing is my favorite member in exo. Thank you.

[idolkiller]

idolkiller @ masterlist

i haven't written a lot of real fic but any crit would be great! :>

[idolkiller]

i've not rea enough of your writing to offer specific critiques, but i really loved your krisyeol fic with fansite-hyung!kris.

[idolkiller]

aw, thank you! that's really nice to hear since honestly that's the fic i didn't really want to post + still feel a little iffy about ;;

[idolkiller]

really? aww ;_; i thought it was really good and the way you adapted krisyeol's characterisation to their universe while still keeping them IC was pretty awesome. so i hope that makes you feel a bit better about it!

[deplore]

deplore / masterlist

i still feel fairly new to writing for kfandom, so any/all feedback would be helpful! if i had to critique my own writing, i would have... a lot of things to say u__u but the main thing is that i feel that there are still a lot of characterizations i struggle with. thank you for any feedback given beforehand! o/

[deplore]

just dropping by to mention that "notice me this year" had me in tears of laughter the whole time and i love you for it

[deplore]

i'm happy it could make you laugh, anon! ♥

[ippeun_nuna]

I'm not gonna get anon for I am not coming with constructive criticism. When it comes to fanfiction I am not one who goes too much after the writing skills or flow etc. I know it impacts on me, but I don't care as long as there is nicely balanced ammount of sexual heat&strong emotions and as long as I see that the writer does think about the story itself, the characters dynamics and link to the "real" life of them. You excell in all of this and you made me fall in love with your Hogyu in particular. I love the way you make an easy-going story profound in emotions and how you arouse the questioning of "wait, this could be actually happening!" with the real-infinite world/happening/history mentioning.
Oh, this got way longer than I wanted it to be.
But peace! Criticism to make: too little hogyu in your masterlist!
<3

[staygame]

staygame / masterlist

any feedback you can throw my way would be great (◠‿◠)

[staygame]

"i'd like to get my basilisk into your chamber of secrets" made me really want the xiuchen hogwarts au porn mentioned in the fic because unf. and i don't even like that pairing but you wrote it hot enough to make me want it so a+ anon.

[staygame]

ahhh thank you anon, that is nice to hear :D i kept meaning to write a sequel but the timing never worked out, frown face.

[staygame]

exo only, but: i really like your fic, your characterizations have a lot of promise, they seem very well-formed and realistic (as teenagers). your smut is hot and the dynamics cute/funny. sometimes your fic does feel a little 'raw', but i think that will smooth away with more practice? i would really love to see you write something longer!