Comments | annieroo2: FIC - Nii-sama Anew ~Byakuya, Yachiru, Kenpachi ~PG

annieroo2

FIC - Nii-sama Anew ~Byakuya, Yachiru, Kenpachi ~PG

Jan 16, 2009 12:18

Title: Nii-sama Anew
Pairings/Characters: Kuchiki Byakuya, mentions of Kusajishi Yachiru, Zaraki Kenpachi, and a few others
Spoilers: Maybe a few for the omakes, but that’s all I can think of
Warnings: none
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1316
Prompt: Byakuya, no yaoi
Written for: January Birthday Contest - Byakuya Fanfic Category at ( Read more... )

byakuya, yachiru, kenpachi, contest-entry, bleach, fanfic

Comments 24

beautifvl_flaw January 16 2009, 20:26:12 UTC

*SQUEE*

OMG!

*collects self together* That was such a lovely, cute and heart-warming piece! I love it! Love your portrayal of all the characters, especially Byakuya and Zaraki, and just... everything! Made my day XD

annieroo2 January 17 2009, 22:29:15 UTC

Hehe. I love squees. I'm so happy you got so much pleasure out of this story.

Your lovely review and fun remarks are such an ego boost. Thank you! :D

zeldapika January 16 2009, 20:49:52 UTC

Aww! That was so cute! Nice job! :)

annieroo2 January 17 2009, 22:30:40 UTC

Thank you!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment as well. :D

horusguard76 January 17 2009, 03:37:19 UTC

Sweet! What a cute story about a 'domesticated' Byakuya. (in my eyes) Gotta love the effects Yachiru has on everyone around her. :) Lovely story.

annieroo2 January 18 2009, 05:12:17 UTC

Awww! What a lovely thing to say.

I want to see Byakuya rejoin humanity, even if only a little bit. And to me Yachiru is the perfect vehicle for that. So I'm happy you enjoyed my rendition of it.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving such nice remarks. :D

horusguard76 January 18 2009, 06:41:19 UTC

You're very welcome. :)

It's quite amazing just how much Yachiru is liked (and also how much power she wields) throughout all SS. Her impulsion simply forces people to accept their 'fate' instead of hiding themselves behind excuses or politeness.

And I think she acts very much like a cat... which usually cuddles up close to people who don't like cats and therefore simply endure its attention. Same thing happened to Byakuya, all those anime omakes show very nicely how she has already overtaken his ancestral hom. Poor guy. ;)

annieroo2 January 19 2009, 06:13:23 UTC

I adore Yachiru, she seems to be able to bring out the best in people despite themselves. :D

Oh yes I love the omakes, they are so very much fun and give us glimpses of the more relaxed side of all the characters. Also, they're interesting to draw on for stories. XD

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annieroo2 January 18 2009, 07:29:47 UTC

Oh my gosh. *blushes* I feel like my ego just inflated to twice it's normal size. :D

It's so gratifying to see your comments. It means what I wrote actually worked. *laughs*

I like to think eventually Byakuya will have a soft spot for something whimsical like Yachiru's artwork. And I'll bet by the time she stops drawing Rukia will have put together a dozen or more scrap books for him. :D

Thank you so much for reading this and taking the time to leave such a wonderful review. :D

akuni January 17 2009, 19:48:21 UTC

This is just so warm and fuzzy. I love seeing Byakuya unbend, a little at a time. It really will take years, but eventually they'll wear him down and he'll thaw out just enough.

Bonus points for the composition of the wackiest family in Soul Society. ^_^

annieroo2 January 19 2009, 03:05:25 UTC

*giggles* I always think its a hoot when you comment on a story you beta. Haven't you already commented out your ears. That being said, I do love your comments.

I want to see Byakuya unbend so badly because I love him so much and I get tired of being pissed off at him. *g* I think I wrote this to help satisfy that wish. It just makes me doubly happy that it worked for you as well. :D

I love this family, if I'd thought of a way to include Uncle Ikkaku and Uncle Yumichika without overwhelming the story I might have. ;)

Thanks again for everything! The story wouldn't have been the same without your help.

akuni January 19 2009, 03:11:23 UTC

Hee, well, you know I always find it a bit weird when I don't see a beta comment on a story. :) Different strokes, I guess!

Byakuya has his moments. Just when I think he's OMG A TOTAL BITCH he does something that reveals he's really got a soft marshmallowy core. Granted, it's a really small core, but it's in there!

Uncle Ikkaku and Aunt Uncle Yumichika can be worked in in a few more decades. One step at a time, indeed. :D

I'm really happy with how this one turned out. I'm glad you let me see it and convince you it was already great. :)

annieroo2 January 19 2009, 05:04:29 UTC

really, really tiny gooey center *lol*

Nah I know it's there. The cloaks for Heuco Mundo were a sweet touch, but it totally cranks my chain when he refuses to look at Rukia. Yet, still I love him. *sigh*

*laughs* I almost wrote Auntie Yumi, but I was afraid to offend your sense of aesthetics. *g*

I hope you know I never would have posted this without your input. It never would have felt complete without you pointing out my "issues". XD

So thanks again, really. :D

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