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Fic: "a little bit of your song" (Peter/Claire) NC-17

May 28, 2009 04:50

Title: a little bit of your song
Author: Steph (andbless_mybaby)
Pairing: Peter/Claire, Andy/Claire (Sandra)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings:canon incest, angst, porn
Spoilers: 1x20: Five Years Gone
Summary: Peter and Claire connect again and again, before and during the events of “5YG”
Word Count: 3,800

Author’s Notes: Beta’d by Kathryn (The Amazing), aka kathrynthegr8.
( you step a little closer to me, so close that I can't see what's going on )

pairing: peter/claire, fic: heroes_exchange, rating: nc-17, pairing: andy/sandra

Comments 10

paynesgrey May 28 2009, 14:08:16 UTC

Oh WOW. This was fantastic. I love how you perfectly just plopped them down in the Five Years Gone time and it just fit so right, like a missing piece of time. Great job bringing back some Five Years Gone fic, and this was so incredible and hot.

Wonderful job.

andbless_mybaby May 28 2009, 14:27:38 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! 5YG is definitely my favorite episode of all time - it lends itself to so much AU, doesn't it? I'm so glad you liked it. :)

sinverguenza May 28 2009, 14:26:35 UTC

oh, i can't believe i didnt comment on this over at the comm, but i ADORED this story. it is SO wonderful. sexy and heartbroken. it's gorgeous!

andbless_mybaby May 28 2009, 14:29:16 UTC

Thank you! :)

shimmeree May 29 2009, 03:12:00 UTC

I love you so much. I do, I do, I do. There was enough angst in this fic to nearly shove me into a depression! ;) Beautifully written.

andbless_mybaby May 29 2009, 10:44:10 UTC

Well, the feeling is mutual. :)

You know I love me some angst. I think I actually go my fill writing this story. (lol) Thank you so much for the awesome feedback.

<3

bellonablack May 29 2009, 03:23:29 UTC

Well (I wish I could read your mind--must be a wonderful lyrical place)

It hurt my feelings ,lol. This fic. I love all the details. oh, the lipstick. That's such a moment.
I felt sorry for her, and almost felt like lashing out at Peter. He's kind of selfish in that heroic way, and in that way, when that side of him is brought out, I get grouchy with him, lol. I understood his side of it but at the same time-

I felt sorry for her, the whole time. She just wanted a normal love (and it's lie?).

Beautifully written.

andbless_mybaby May 29 2009, 11:02:24 UTC

Peter's a Petrelli, which is the excuse I've always made for that "noble asshole" thing that he does a lot. I like that you noticed that. Of course, I pretty much like everything you say when you comment on something I've written. (By "pretty much," I mean "100% always.")

Thank you so much for reading and letting me know that you liked it. :)

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andbless_mybaby June 2 2009, 01:22:33 UTC

Oh noooooez, you did not just get that song stuck in my head. :p

Thank you so, so, so much for reading and leaving your typically awesome feedback. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. You totally feel me on Peter, obviously. His future self is so emo, isn't he?