Fic-thingy: AU Stargate. Cameron/Teal'c

[ana_grrl]

Yeah, so that Cam Mitchell: Bounty Hunter thing I was blithering about earlier? Yep. Got some of it down. May or may not try to flesh it out into something longer/larger (because AU in a fandom I've just started writing in? Has the potential to be all sorts of wrong

Comments

[lyrstzha]

Fun AU! This 'verse has potential, and I'm interested to see where it goes from here.

And you know what struck me about halfway through? In this piece, Cam and Teal'c feel an awful lot like Mal and Zoë (with a bit less of a dark undertone on Cam's part, and some sex, obviously)---and then I came to the part with Vala, who's so very Saffron. Now I can't help thinking of Cam in a floral bonnet.

[ana_grrl]

I was thinking a bit about a Fireflyesque universe here. I completely didn't make the Vala-Saffron connection at all, though. It works. Except I don't think Vala's so vile. Well, maybe just vile in another, more amusing way.

And really, I think it would be Teal'c in the bonnet. He's a hat-magnet.

(actually, now I have this image of Cam and Teal'c pulling a job where they have to dress up similar to the job at the beginning of Our Mrs. Reynolds. And Teal'c's in the bonnet, and Cameron is saying "Now, you folk don't want to be annoying the Mrs. here, she's got a real short temper." And then Teal'c pulling out a zat gun (from beneath his pretty floral dress) and zapping the bounty, and Cameron having to shake his head at the prone bodies and say, "I warned you." And then saying something about Teal'c in a skirt that gets him a flat look (and sex, later).)

[lyrstzha]

That last image? Awesome! And since Jaffa are used to wearing sort of battle-kilt type things, it's only reasonable that Teal'c wear the skirt.

[ana_grrl]

Cameron would just get tangled up in those long layers if he had to run.

[tealc_junky]

Oh my, you've sucked me in. I wanna know what happens next. More please? *puppy eyes*

[ana_grrl]

More please?

I'm working on it. Sort of! Thanks for the encouragement!

[tealc_junky]

No problem, thanks for the entertainment! :)

[rydra_wong]

"I do not believe there is anything bad about your ass."

This may be the definitive Jaffa pick-up line *g*.

[ana_grrl]

lol. It's smooth and uses a limited number of words.

[kres]

Oh YEAH! Right on! So short, and yet so powerful. Condensed. Yeah. And IC. Very. Ha!

More please :)=

[ana_grrl]

Oooooh, thanks for the encouragement! I'm afraid my brain might get sucked into this AU universe, which will be fun for me, but also -- do people want to read an AU from a writer who is new to the fandom?? Anyway, I'm very pleased you enjoyed it! I'm hoping that there may be a kind of snippet-series story that comes out of this.

[dustandroses]

Personally, I don't care if you're new to the fandom, if the AU is good, I'll read it. And this is good. And I love these two together, so please right more!

[ana_grrl]

Oh, thank you so much! I do want to write more of the AU, so I really appreciate your encouragement :) I'm delighted you enjoyed them!

[belleimani]

That's awesome. Right on. And the voices are still them, you know?

[ana_grrl]

*beams* Thank you! Especially for the voices comment. It's very encouraging!

[belleimani]

You're welcome, and believe me I know how hard it is to get the voices right!