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lunabee34 July 3 2007, 01:04:59 UTC
*wah*

This is so sad.

*pets Evan*

Poor baby.

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ana_grrl July 3 2007, 01:10:34 UTC
This is so sad.

*g* I didn't really think of it as super-sad! I thought it as more pragmatic or something, lol! And, if I was a better person, I would have written all the smut in between ;)

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lunabee34 July 3 2007, 01:15:21 UTC
No, dude, do not misunderstand me. :) I like that it ended in the way that being forced to bond with someone like that against your and his will likely would. I mean, as much as the notion of enforced slavery leading to eternal happiness might appeal, I think that probably it would be hugely upsetting and pretty much a deal breaker once the slavitude wore off. LOL

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ana_grrl July 3 2007, 01:21:46 UTC
I like that it ended in the way that being forced to bond with someone like that against your and his will likely would.

Yay! Thank you! Accidental slavery leading to true love is pretty common in the accidental slavery genre. And I like reading those fics a lot. But! I wanted to try something slightly different with these! I'm really glad they worked for you! :D :D

...but I really do want to write the smut in between *g*

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adafrog July 3 2007, 22:15:03 UTC
NO, no, no! You mustn't end it there!

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ana_grrl July 20 2007, 21:45:32 UTC
I'm sorry! I like ambiguous endings!

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infinimato July 4 2007, 06:05:25 UTC
poor little boys. what a mess!

re: earlier comment about "three minutes of parrish" -- i'm a bad person for immediately thinking of "1 night in paris", right? :-P

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ana_grrl July 20 2007, 21:46:13 UTC
- i'm a bad person for immediately thinking of "1 night in paris", right? :-P

*g* Nope :D

I'm glad you liked this!

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Hopeful for more anonymous July 9 2009, 21:38:58 UTC
Just over a year after you posted the story and I wanted to prod (gently) to see if you ever had any luck writing Parrish's POV on this one. I'm such an angst lover and if Lorne was screwed up, Parrish must have been twice as bad. I can imagine him getting an update from Carson the day after he lets Lorne have a little fun about how the device is slowly pulling Lorne in.... Angst galore. And I think we all would love to see what happened in between Lorne talking to Carson and the day they got the device out. Thanks!

Dark Squirrel

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Re: Hopeful for more ana_grrl August 11 2022, 01:31:01 UTC
Hello - I know it's like, 12 years later or something, but I actually did end up writing a sequel to this recently (Parrish POV), and if you're interested, it's here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/40947225

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