Firefly fic: Not Some Romantical Enounter (NC-17; Jayne/Simon, Jayne/Inara)

[ana_grrl]

Title: Not Some Romantical Encounter
Pairing: Jayne/Simon, Jayne/Inara
Rating: NC-17
Words: About 2800
Summary: Jayne's shoulder hurts, and his pants are too tight.
Notes: This is for svmadelyn's Kink/Cliche Challenge. My prompt: weapons kink. Many, many thanks to reve_lucide for the beta and encouragement, and lunabee34 for assuring me it works. Also, thank you to ozsaur for her

Comments

[valiant]

AHHHH. I LOVE THIS. It's brilliantly handled. I mean, you'd think "weapons kink" would be a certain way with Jayne, all shiny guns and knives, but I love the inclusion of Inara and the crossbow. Unexpected and - man, it's just freakishly hot. JAYNE/SIMON. It has been too long.

And as always, your Jayne is so fun to read, 'cause he's so unapologetic and well-captured. I was totally cringing every time Wash's death was mentioned so simply and crudely, but that's so totally the way Jayne would say it.

Man, I seriously love this.

[ana_grrl]

Ooooh, shiny awesome comments! Thank you :D

I was totally cringing every time Wash's death was mentioned so simply and crudely, but that's so totally the way Jayne would say it.

Me too! I wrote that first line and I thought, "Maybe that's a little harsh," but then I decided it's Jayne. He doesn't mince words. And just because he's totally crude about the way he puts it doesn't mean that he's not regretting it or something (I tried to put a hint of loss at Wash's death in there. But without being sentimental or something).

Unexpected and - man, it's just freakishly hot

Eeeee! Yay! Thank you! I'm so relieved.

JAYNE/SIMON. It has been too long.

This is exactly how I feel. I wish I had 20 Jayne/Simon ideas so that I could write them. *shakes fist at reluctant Jayne/Simon*

[ozsaur]

Wow, I really wasn't expecting you to go in this direction! I love that you included Inara. And crossbow training! That was a surprise.

And it broke my heart a little every time Wash was brought up. But I'm glad you included him.

Enjoyed the story very much!

[ana_grrl]

Wow, I really wasn't expecting you to go in this direction!

:D Me either. I started writing it and was shocked to discover I was in danger of writing Jayne/Inara smut. "Backpedal!" I thought frantically ;)

Ooops, I also totally forgot to thank you for the suggestions when I was whinging about story ideas. I need to put that in my notes!

And it broke my heart a little every time Wash was brought up. But I'm glad you included him.

I thought it was a little harsh putting him in there with such crude Jayne thoughts about his death, but then I decided that's how Jayne would think about it, so I left it in there.

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

[aryas_zehral]

*chuckle*

Thought you said you couldn't write at the moment? This is great. Hot. I love the inclusion of Inara and the idea of Jayne getting worked up not simply at the weapons but that it's proficiency that really gets him going. Also the idea of Jayne standing above them so he can look down her top is just... very Jayne. Lol.

[ana_grrl]

I really, really struggled with this fic! It was like pulling teeth. Which is what a lot of writing is like for me right now. So I don't feel like I'm particularly able to write! Weird, eh? Anyway, I'm really glad you like the end result! Thank you!

[anxiety_junkie]

He comes all over his hand. It ain't nothing new, except for the naked thoughts of Simon that go with it.

Ah, hell.

Bwahaha! I can just hear him saying that last bit. *g*

And I love the fact that Jayne had no interest in Simon at all until he noticed his hands reloading. Lovely!

[ana_grrl]

Bwahaha! I can just hear him saying that last bit. *g*

Yay! Me too - and that image + 'Ah, hell' was a central point for me starting the fic - I didn't know how to approach it right away, but I knew I had to include that in it!

Thanks! I'm really glad you like it :D

[evilmaniclaugh]

Perfectly perfect as always. Plus you kick started my smut writing brain which was so very needed.

:D

[ana_grrl]

Thank you!

Plus you kick started my smut writing brain

Excellent :D