Fic: The Servant (32/32)

Oct 30, 2011 13:06

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mhobbs0430 October 30 2011, 18:33:43 UTC
I loved it!!!!!!!

And yes, there should definitely be a sequel. Like you said, you have some loose ends to tie up, like Adam and Kris's reunion.

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amberwinters October 30 2011, 23:21:48 UTC
I know I robbed you all of some serious sexy times. I was originally going to include a scene where Kim caught them but I had dragged the fic out long enough. Plus I kind of figured a sequel was coming so I wanted to give myself an open ended start.

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amberwinters October 30 2011, 23:27:44 UTC
Thank you so much. I am glad the ending didn't disappoint. I actually knew this ending a few chapters back. I don't always know how it will conclude when I write but this one I planned. Maybe that is what I am supposed to do, lol.

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stormybear30 October 30 2011, 18:43:25 UTC
You have no idea how sorry I am to see this end. I've loved everything about this story from the intrigue and betrayal to the lover story between Kris and Adam. Bravo my dear....BRAVO!!! You always have the most amazing story ideas and I love that you share them with us Can't wait to see what you have in line for us next.

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amberwinters October 31 2011, 09:16:06 UTC
I am bittersweet towards ending it. Happy to have completed it but miss plotting and writing. I am actually going to read a book on fiction writing before I start on my next fic. We'll see if it helps or hinders my writing, lol.

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hillside1 October 30 2011, 19:39:09 UTC
I liked the peaceful ending. Sequel please. Loved your story. I hate to see this story end. I really hope to see Kris and Adam together.

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amberwinters October 31 2011, 09:17:09 UTC
I am glad you liked the ending. There was enough violence and gore in earlier chapters so I figured I didn't need an epic battle.

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hibaalhadid October 30 2011, 20:14:08 UTC
awwww happy ending

I was so worried that Madu will Kill Adam but thank God he didn't, it was a chapter full of events and it was really good

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amberwinters October 31 2011, 09:17:53 UTC
Thank you so much. Madu killing Adam would not have been a very popular ending.

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