LJ Idol Season 8, Home Game Entry: Holes

Aug 16, 2012 18:50


This is my home game entry for Week 37 of LJ Idol.

A creator of worlds at work. )

lj idol, season 8, via ljapp

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kathrynrose August 17 2012, 01:17:31 UTC
"It's OK, Mommy. I get more water."

I love this!

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alycewilson August 17 2012, 12:54:05 UTC
Thanks! I was so tickled when he said that.

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muchtooarrogant August 17 2012, 02:11:14 UTC
<< Gently, I explain to him that sand is made of particles. Raising a handful up, I let it spill through my fingers. "The water will flow between the particles and sink into the sand," I tell him. >>

Your Cut Text title caught my attention, and even here, when it was plain you weren't being literal, I was thinking, "Maybe they're God-like beings?" LOL Trying so hard to force you in a direction you weren't going. *grin*

<< Is it my job, I wonder, to prepare him for disappointment? Or just to be there for him when things inevitably sink through the particles of his life? Loss, heartbreak, failure? >>

That was beautiful. So much captured in so few words.

Dan

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alycewilson August 17 2012, 12:55:13 UTC
Thank you. I thought of doing fiction with a childlike god but decided to stick closer to reality.

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n3m3sis42 August 17 2012, 03:00:12 UTC
Awwww.

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alycewilson August 17 2012, 12:55:34 UTC
:)

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alycewilson August 17 2012, 12:56:54 UTC
Thank you. Children's imagination is awesome. Not mentioned here, my nephew was building a utopia!

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halfshellvenus August 17 2012, 19:45:25 UTC
Is it my job, I wonder, to prepare him for disappointment? Or just to be there for him when things inevitably sink through the particles of his life?

There's such soulfulness to this question. It's one that I think most parents never stop asking themselves.

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