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aloysiavirgata

This Her Fever - 1/3

Apr 14, 2009 06:54

SUMMARY: It is, she thinks, a fitting coda to her life that Mulder and Father McCue should cross paths in this room, both trying to offer her salvation.

RATING: Strong R verging on NC-17 for language and sexual content.

SPOILERS: Redux II and Detour

DISCLAIMER: Breaking seal constitutes acceptance of agreement. Proceed at your own risk. Do not use ( Read more... )

missing scene, redux, cancerfic, msr, angst, detour, humor, fanfic:xf

Comments 48

Loved this valz1013 April 14 2009, 19:16:01 UTC

This is so beautifully heartfelt on so many levels. The characterization, bantering amidst the angst, is so right on. I loved this,
"Mulder is amused by these James Bond shenanigans. She's a grown woman and can check herself out of the hospital any time she wants, much less go outside for some air on a temperate September night. But he's glad to see this playfulness at work in her; a spark he thought had gone out.

"Should I knock out an orderly and steal his uniform? Disguise you as a sack of laundry?"

I actually appreciate the way you've written everyone here.
My only regret is that I have to go and grade at least 10 essays before I allow myself to finish...rats (it'll be worth it though).

Re: Loved this aloysiavirgata April 15 2009, 20:14:48 UTC

Thank you for this very generous feedback! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story so much, and that the characterization and dialogue felt right to you. I appreciate the time you took to share a favorite line. That always means a lot.

I hope the essays weren't too tedious.

scooly42 April 14 2009, 21:48:55 UTC

so far, good stuff. on to the next part! <3

aloysiavirgata April 15 2009, 20:08:14 UTC

Ooooh....sexy icon. Thanks for the feedback!

luciddreamer326 April 14 2009, 22:33:05 UTC

Wee! I love it. On to part dos.

aloysiavirgata April 15 2009, 20:17:14 UTC

Thanks for checking in! Glad it's still holding together for you.

silenceandnoise April 14 2009, 23:22:00 UTC

Eeeeeeeee!!!! A new fic from you usually causes me to make sounds only dogs can hear. This is definitely Kindle worthy!! I can't wait to finish it tonight. I promise to come back with more complete thoughts.

aloysiavirgata April 15 2009, 19:45:30 UTC

Well, you certainly know how to pay a pretty compliment! Thanks so very much for the lovely feedback.

colebaltblue April 14 2009, 23:27:26 UTC

wow. just wow.

I really love your portrayal of Bill so far. People always make him out to be so evil, and I've never thought of him that way. The angst between M and S and palpable and I just love it.

And I just love Scully's story about the Milky Way, that's defintely a story that Scully would tell Mulder.

I can't wait to read the next two sections!

aloysiavirgata April 15 2009, 19:43:53 UTC

I'm really glad that Bill rings true to you. I don't get this idea that he's evil. Can you imagine if Scully and Melissa were your sisters, people?

The Story Girl and its sequel, The Golden Road, are really lovely books. I can't wait until my children are old enough to appreciate them. I'm glad you agree it's one Scully would enjoy as well.