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all_you_wanted

Surveillance [Smallville, R]

Dec 15, 2006 08:34

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series: summer of exile, slash, fic: smallville, challenge: 50_smutlets, het

Comments 23

frelling_tralk December 15 2006, 17:05:38 UTC

Hot!

all_you_wanted December 15 2006, 17:21:52 UTC

Thank you.

miche_connor December 16 2006, 01:21:33 UTC

Oh man. That was... an amazing glimpse of what could well have happened. I hope (sincerely!) that you write more, because, dang.

(and Chloe needs to totally get even with Clark.:)

(friends you, I hope you do not mind)

all_you_wanted December 18 2006, 16:54:12 UTC

Don't mind at all. Hope you don't mind the Chlark. (I only 'other' write like 20% of the time)

Glad you liked it.

mskatej December 16 2006, 01:22:21 UTC

DUDE. This story is not only hot as hell but *totally fascinating*. Thank you so much! I thoroughly enjoyed this. Voyeurism is one of my favourite kinks and omg... the whole THING is a voyeurist's fantasy come true. RED CLARK! With needy Chloe. Being watched by obsessive Lex. *loves*

all_you_wanted December 18 2006, 16:57:56 UTC

I'm happy you liked it so much. I used to run for the hills from the Clex stuff, but you inspired me with fun polls, picsam and the occasional hot as fuck story to not fear the Clex, but embrace it.

ivorykiss December 16 2006, 01:40:48 UTC

I know I've commented before, but I just have to say it again. This is one hell of a fic. The whole atmosphere of the darker take Lex's obsession with Clark is eerie and hot at the same time. I loved the duality of watching hot Kaloe action through Lex's eyes and the reader being as much as a voyeur as Lex himself, the reader gets to watch Lex watch them. (god, i hope that made sense!)

Kinda ironic too, in that this is one of those fics that have to be saved and read over and over, to catch all the little subtleties. Kinda like Lex and his 'gem'.

Fanfuckingtastic!!

all_you_wanted December 18 2006, 16:58:41 UTC

Well pat yourself on the back too. You fixed my 'wank'. :p

ivorykiss December 20 2006, 10:10:11 UTC

Thanks for the thanks, and I certainly don't mind taking the blame for any little thing I could do to encourage the wank. :p This is a terrific story. I heart it. Alot. :D

kissme_myfool December 16 2006, 02:34:53 UTC

AWESOME! The Chloe fan in me felt bad for Chloe though..not so bad cause well Kal showed her a good time.

all_you_wanted December 18 2006, 16:59:58 UTC

Thanks. I felt bad for Chloe too and I was writing the mean things Lex was thinking about her.

The Lex in my mind doesn't share food or farmboys well.