[Critique Me] Kinesthetic tetrameter

[aliothsan]

Yesterday I noticed something

Comments

[arujei]

I'm just wondering, are you still playing around with trochees? I'm sort of assuming a yes when I read it.

I almost thought for a second when I saw "Kinesthetic" that you had come up with your own meter.

[aliothsan]

Yes.

Heheheh...yeah, that would be awesome.

thanks much

[anonymous]

nice work, man