Jump, Jump for Your Love

[alexjanna91]

Title: Jump, Jump for Your Love
Author: alexjanna91
Word Count: 8,043
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Genre: slight AU, pre-slash
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: slight violence, language, spoilers for OoTP, HBP and DH non-compliant
Summary: Harry Potter had just jumped in front of a Killing Curse for him. A chilling ache started up in his heart and screamed through his chest.

Comments

[tigersilver]

Oh, excellent! That was really a lovely in-depth on Draco's feelings and thought-process, as well as a great showcase of his Wizarding power and how he uses it. I enjoyed Dumbledore and the other adults you portrayed as well, and especially the nasty ones like Fudge and the Healer. You really made me dislike them intensely! Good job!

[alexjanna91]

Thank you! Draco is traditionally supposed to be powerful and I tried to make that apparent with the little time he was seen fighting. I'm glad you hated Fudge and the healer. I hated them too. ;)

[773fiction]

I can't come up with any other word than amazing.

[alexjanna91]

Thank you!

[dameange]

loved this!

[alexjanna91]

Thank you!

[charlikane01]

This was fabulous. I loved Draco's snark and the conversations he had with Ron and Hermione.

[alexjanna91]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[martinstjohn]

Superbly crafted, great bunny, really great use of characters, nice to see the view that Draco would naturally mature and, with that maturity, be more level headed and even loveable.

[alexjanna91]

Thank you. I tried to make Draco seem more mature than he is often portrayed. I'm glad you enjoyed this little one-shot.