Lost fic: Waiting on a friend

Jul 14, 2008 12:13


Title: Waiting on a friend
Character: Sawyer
Words: 1200
Rating: PG13 - a few bad words. It's all Sawyer's fault, really.
Disclaimer: Lost is not mine, the title is from a Rolling Stones' song and the idea of giving titles
taken from songs is not mine, either! (janie_tangerine , it's your fault *winks ( Read more... )

my fic, lost:sawyer, luau, lost fic, lost

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alemyrddin July 14 2008, 14:15:09 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting.
And well, I can't help seeing Charlie as a sort of protecting spirit for his friends. I'm very glad you liked it!

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alemyrddin July 14 2008, 14:29:57 UTC
aw, thank you so much, hon! *hugs your comment and you for good measure ( ... )

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alemyrddin July 14 2008, 14:38:02 UTC
Thank you! I was worried because I kind of lured you into reading this and there was only a couple of lines about Charlie - though really, he was behind all of this, imo, making Sawyer find the guitar so he could find Vincent.

I'm very glad that you liked line (differently from a previous comment, this one I had to think about, and I'm glad it was worth the effort).

I think that reasoning about not wanting to stay on the beach is not entirely my own doing... halfdutch has given a similar thought to Juliet in this fic, and I was inspired by that.
But yes, the idea that they are presumed dead by their friends is really heartbreaking. *sighs*

Anyway, I'm very glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

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siluria July 14 2008, 18:28:00 UTC
Awwwwww, so cute!! I love how Charlie is checking up on him, and that Vincent is there. A dog should always be man's best friend :) It's really sweet - thank you!!!!

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alemyrddin July 15 2008, 08:05:24 UTC
Thank you!
I'm happy you liked it, even if it fitted your prompt only in part.
:)

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jazzpno July 14 2008, 20:31:05 UTC
So very sweet. I've always fancied Sawyer as an artist of some kind. I'm a musician, and I love the idea of him taking solace in music.

That clearing scene is my favorite from Season 1, and I have a strong emotional attachment to the song American Pie!

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alemyrddin July 15 2008, 08:07:57 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked!

I too think that Sawyer could easily be an artist - his career as a conman only being in support of this idea.

I loved that scene in the clearing too (of course! One of the best J/S scenes...) and I'm glad that you liked my choice of song (It was hard! Not being American myself, to find something not too modern, not too difficult, and not completely out of character).

Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

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