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[albion1919]

Title: Paths
Characters: Maya/Sylar
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 2, 498
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: My heart is beating in your hand.
Note: Smut! 1st person POV from Maya.

Comments

Sleeves!

[razycrandomgirl]

GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH!

ETA: Okay I've got my brain reformed (a bit).

I love that it's from her POV and that its not really tainted by Sylar. It's just her love for him. The poor girl (only 'poor' because we know) is in love!

And this fits pretty damn near perfectly in the verse. It could have happened. I like the image of him at her feet. I like his last ditch attempt to make her his/understand.

This make me understand why she was so very pissed when she'd discovered he'd lied to her.

Wow and well done! :)

Re: Sleeves!

[albion1919]

THAAAAAAAAAAAAAANKS! lol ;P

That's was I was gong for, see things from her POV and everything at that point is the happiest her life has been in months, maybe years. We both know she's "deeply feeling" and "loves to much" I think she regards her relationship with Gabriel as something quite spiritual, as well as everything else it means to her. But damn it's hard not to come across as sappy lol, I hope so anyway.

*nods* That's kinda what I was going for, I think she'd be assured enough to sleep with him if she wished and he'd be nervous. No acting for him then! Yeah he wants her to accept her power but that's a no-no.

She almost killed him! :O

Thank you again! :D

Re: Sleeves!

[razycrandomgirl]

She almost killed him! :O

I might have been like that too, such betrayal.

Maya needs a Vacation!

[dream_infinity0]

nice fic from her pov.. I wander if her and sylar are working together next season. that would be great.

[albion1919]

Thank you! Well I hope they have scenes together, Dania says that Maya wants to find Sylar :)

[sinemoras09]

Oh man. This was great--the first person POV was really interesting, it definitely paints the relationship between Maya and Sylar in a different light. She cared about him and she had fallen in love with him, and now it's easy to understand why she was so hurt/angry during the finale. I love how Sylar's possessiveness is portrayed here, and how Maya reacts with an equally possessive vigor with the whole "Crossed Paths" thing. Nicely done!

[albion1919]

Thank you so much! *nods* I think it's easy to overlook what happened and just write it off as manipulation but if it's from her POV? It's a totally different story. She possessive, he’s all she has (she thinks)

:D :D

[fifmeister]

Whew! The smut was fantastic, as always. ;) And it was great reading a fic from Maya's point of view; it just gives an even deeper insight into her thoughts and feelings. It made me sad reading it, though, because it just highlights how thoroughly she was deceived. Though I did like the parts where Sylar seemed to be hesitating a little--I don't know if I was imagining it or not, but maybe there were hints of guilt there?

Anyway, lovely job as always! :)

[razycrandomgirl]

don't know if I was imagining it or not, but maybe there were hints of guilt there?

I saw it too!

[albion1919]

Heehee, thanks! *nods* yeah it was bittersweet writing it but I did try to convey that his feelings were something other then muahaha. So yup there is some guilt there, some anxiety about sleeping with her because well, it's Gabriel Gray under there lol.

Thank you!