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[albion1919]

Title: Dreams, part 2 (complete)

Characters: Maya/Sylar

Rating: NC-17

Word count: 2,000

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: “I can make you mine, taste your lips of wine, anytime, night or day.”

Note: KW Verse for Cana. Smut and angst. Tis a bit disjointed.
Written for 

Comments

[albion1919]

*glows gleefully* OMG thank you!

Yes exactly! I think her memories would always by tainted with sadness and bitterness but she was in love with him and for awhile she was happy. I find it tragic for both of them, regardless of what you may think he felt or didn't for her he still lost the one person left that actually cared for him.

*hugs* I'm really glad you liked it :D

[gimmemypickle]

This is beautifully intense. Wonderful addition to the KW universe!

[albion1919]

Thank you!! I'll keep adding ;)

[dream_infinity0]

this is perfect how it goes to past and present...great work again

[albion1919]

Thank you! I hoped that wouldn't be to jarring so thanks for saying so :) :)

*is a lame Fanfgirl for your work*

[razycrandomgirl]

oh ... I love it. that last bit and the understanding they share ... it's like one more nail in their effeed up relationship.

He thought he found a way to be with her (finally). And I bet he prided himself in some way on the control he forged when they were together, and how he didn't just force himself on her. He found another way to lose himself.

his humanity is still there, but he almost turned his back on it playing that dangerous game. I'm glad she nipped it in the bud, so to speak, because that was a slippery slope he was treading.

The fact that he stopped when she confronted him with the truth, proves his (love?)strong feelings for her. I bet the fact that he messed it up so horribly haunts him more than any hurtful thing she could think to say. He knows it. It is all his fault. All of it. She loved him and he messed it up so badly.

That violent rush in him to take after such a forceful self inflicted abstinence had subsided as the night sky started to tinge with dawn and he had made love to her slow and soft.Wonderful

Re: *is a lame Fanfgirl for your work*

[albion1919]

WEEEEEEEEEEE!! *hugs*

Yup, it was the wake up he needed. He was behaving in that way, teasing and provoking her because he didn't know what else to do. Either that or he comes to terms that it's really over and how much he messed up.

*nods* He certainly was. She wanted to reach that part of him she prays is actually real you know?

I said above that it's actually really tragic. People tend to dismiss what they shared because of his villain shtick but damn he actually found a woman that loved him, Gabriel. And the same for her of course. That really should have been played up on the show.

I like the veil symbolism because it's like a barrier to what he wants. Something untouchable etc. And he’s all about the role-play ;) ohh, didn't even think of the bride symbolism until just now LOL :x

Ahhh thank you hun, I'm super happy you enjoyed reading this :D :D

Re: *is a lame Fanfgirl for your work*

[razycrandomgirl]

Question ... the garden bit was a dream too?

well I thought the nun thing first, if that makes you feel any better. ps is was awesome!

I reread it and he sooooo crossed a line. He probably thought he was just bringing out Maya's deepest darkest most shameful true feelings, but he was basically forcing himself on her.

Got to give him kudos though, for stopping (and for waiting as long as he did to really try anything.)

Also Maya gave up some when she confessed that she took solace in the memories. though it may just twist the knife in a little deeper for him .

you made my week. I am infatuated.

Talk tomorrow. I'm going to bed early.

Re: *is a lame Fanfgirl for your work*

[albion1919]

Nope to me that was real. It's all asphalt otherwise and I think he may have a green thumb XD XD Anyway good for kids to play in :x

*phew* nuns are "brides of Christ" so it's always got that connotation

Hmmm, actually I was trying to be ambiguous because I never stated if he changed them or not, that's just what she thinks :x Either way she definitely felt his presence within them.

Yeah she did. Must be so confusing and stressful to have such conflicting emotions. oh yup, she hopes so anyway ;)

Awwww thank you, it was a lot of fun to write, if kinda depressing at the end.

Chat to you soon ^_^

[fifmeister]

Oh, this is fantastic! I absolutely LOVE the ending, how Maya totally pwns Sylar and how he feels the full crushing blow of the consequences of his actions. It's brilliant and so what he has coming to him. *happy sigh*

Totally random, but have you been posting your fics in a bigger font recently? Because the text looks larger than usual to me, and I'm not sure if it's my monitor or not.

[albion1919]

Thank you! Yup he really needed that realisation or more Maya needed to see it.

I was iffy that it might look huge to you. All the text for me is really small now for some reason so I put it on medium instead of small and it looks ok to me. I dunno why it's happening but I'll change it back.