FANFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[akashacatbat]

I'm posting this here mainly because I know Joe will read it at some point in time. It is a Phantom slash fic, and I am considering entering it in a little competion on a website. Two things I am concerned about though

Comments

Hmmm...

[anonymous]

I think it's wonderful that you are setting the whole situation to start during the original, it gives it a firmer base of support. Who is to say that this isn't what he was thinking? Pretty good so far, if it is a little bit scattered.

One more thing...

[anonymous]

If you plan to divide it into movements, you'll want them to be longer. Most big songs have like four movements, with Arias further dividing it. You might consider further dividing your peice into Arias, also. I like the word Aria.
ARIA!

Yet more!

[anonymous]

Why do you need a Phantom DVD? You already have one, whiner. Anyway, I'm gone until sunday, but I expect an update when I get back! Or you shall feel my wrath!
Maybe not...
But still...