Two drabbles, both PG

Feb 23, 2006 11:41



Thanks to lyras for the beta. ♥

for xellas

Ginny/Luna
"wishing well"
100 words

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aillil February 23 2006, 11:06:34 UTC
Thank you. :)

I'm getting the hang of Draco by now, but Neville definitely gave me trouble...

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wildestranger February 23 2006, 10:58:54 UTC
Oooooooooooooooooooooooh! This is just gnah, so lovely. Your Neville is just perfect, sitting there quietly and being polite and then....and Draco, bless his selfish, sarcastic little heart. They are utterly delicious. *loves*

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aillil February 23 2006, 11:07:47 UTC
So glad you like your drabble, dear. I wasn't at all sure about Neville, because I don't really have, you know, an opinion on him, so I'm extra-glad it worked for you.
*loves back*

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lyras February 23 2006, 11:38:28 UTC
Excellent last line to the D/N one :D.

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aillil February 23 2006, 16:00:53 UTC
Glad you like it. *ggg* It took me a while to make it fit into the 200 word limit, though.

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secondsilk February 23 2006, 13:00:55 UTC
Lovely, both of them.
Sweet for the first, and cheeky for the second.
Wonderful.

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aillil February 23 2006, 16:04:17 UTC
Thank you so much. The first one was actually my very first attempt at femme slash, and I don't know the characters that well, either, so it was tricky. And Malfoy must be cheeky, he's most fun as a brat. *g*

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archon_mentha February 23 2006, 17:15:40 UTC
Wow - what a clever turn on the prompt! *is surprised and delighted* I would never have thought of that - very, very well done! *Hugs* I didn't know that was your first femmeslash. It was lovely, and I hope you decide to write more of it! Thank you so, so, SO much!

The Neville/Draco is fantastic, too. I have to agree that you've completely nailed Draco's voice, and Neville's was a wonderful balance.

You are wonderful!

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aillil February 23 2006, 17:48:43 UTC
Thank you so much. *blushes*

I'm so glad you like yours, because at first I really didn't know what to write. I don't know either character well, never having concerned myself with them.

You're wonderful, too, dear. *loves*

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