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fic: heroes (somnambulist) Parts III & IV - written for heroes_bigboom

Sep 19, 2009 02:33

Author Name: acinogan
Title: Somnambulist
Word Count: 17,056 split between two posts
Characters/Pairings: Peter, Elle, Sylar, Nathan, Bennet, Angela, Matt, Mohinder, minor OFC; Elle/Sylar; Elle/Peter
Rating: R
Warnings/Spoilers: General spoilers for all of Season Three/Volumes 3 & 4. Picks up after end of Volume 4.
Summary: A major cover-up is revealed, ( Read more... )

fic: heroes (somnambulist), big boom fic

Comments 24

stefichan September 21 2009, 19:38:55 UTC

WOW.

Tht's about all I canmanage right about now, lol.

This was terrific. Loved the happy ending for Elle & Peter <3

acinogan September 21 2009, 21:44:11 UTC

thanks so much! i'm glad you liked it :)

motylik September 22 2009, 09:39:58 UTC

This was brilliant. A great idea for a plot. Oh how I wish this was canon. Brilliant. And well written! :D

acinogan September 22 2009, 13:50:02 UTC

thank you for the lovely comment; i'm glad you liked it :) (i wish it was canon too)

di_elle September 24 2009, 17:57:30 UTC

Oh Sabrina! Thanks for writing this! both because is great and it helped me pass time during physio as you well know!

I now understand your comment in twitter while we were watching Heroes. Is amazing how you managed to put in this, way before them, peter feeling the burden of all the damage his family and the company did, and cutting himself from his family.

The way you managed the re-surfing of Sylar in Nathan? GREAT. Way better than the show and the crap of the soul migrating from one body to another.

aaaand. you wrote it so good that I totally was "wait why Elle is freaking out for nathan coming to her apartment" since I remember that she thought he was Sylar.

only 1 tiny critic: when she eventually descover that sylar is peter and nathan is sylar... well, she is too calm. but other than this, I love the end.

and you made me remember when I shipped a little peter and elle. :D

in 2 words? great work, girl! :D

(completed unreleted dollhouse icon because I can't wait too. And watch flashforward tonight!)

acinogan September 24 2009, 21:16:03 UTC

no, thank YOU for reading and commenting :) glad to help pass the physio time ( ... )

di_elle September 24 2009, 21:56:44 UTC

i know, i was like...hmmm...if i wouldn't be one of the most hated tv writers on the internet, i could go work for heroes, lol.

well, you'll maybe write something that made sense, so you'll be universally called the one who saved heroes... :P

okay, matt's power is MENTAL, it has nothing to do with DNA or whatever they are trying to sell us on the show. matt can control people's minds, not their DNA molcules, or any other kinds of molecules. so i think if/when nathan!sylar starts remembering he's really sylar, it should be mental stuff.

No, is not! he *evolves* or whatever lame excuses they found. But YaY for you for staying true to the mithology they created when the heroes writers cant. *cookies for you* :)