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Velvet Petals, Piercing Thorns - Chapter Twenty, Part Two

Oct 11, 2011 21:16

Title: Velvet Petals, Piercing Thorns - Chapter Twenty (Prologue+20/23)
Media: Fic
Author: a_glass_parade
Beta: mothergoddamn
Rating: Rated R to NC-17
Pairing: Klaine endgame, bumps along the way.
Genre: Romance, AU, Historical Fiction
Warnings: This is essentially a romance novel set in a violent time. There will be, throughout the story, sexual liaisons, murder, torture, bondage ( Read more... )

blaine anderson, vppt, au, kurt hummel, glee, wars of the roses, story: velvet petals, historical fiction

Comments 33

prettypinkdyke October 12 2011, 03:27:04 UTC

Oh holy mother of god. Somewhere about halfway through that sex scene, I started to realize it had been about as many days as it was supposed to have been before Jesse's arrival but that I wasn't sure and so I started to think that maybe he was going to attack them through the window but then that presumably has bars so then I thought maybe he'll be coming up the stairwell and oh god all the hell that could cause and suddenly I was reading the rest of the scene with my eyes the size of saucers and my heart beating at triple rate.

...This is why fanfiction is bad for me, haha. Kurt would probably tell me to stop before I have a heart attack, but too late! I'm way too invested. :)

Anyway, I loved the evolution of Kurt and Blaine's emotions throughout their conversation again here, especially the moment where Blaine's front breaks down and he says he won't lose Kurt to a madman.

Looking forward to seeing where the last few chapters will take them!

a_glass_parade October 12 2011, 04:58:17 UTC

Ahhhh! Okay, I feel like a jackass but I am actually excited that you got that wound up reading this. I'm sorry. Writers are assholes. But GRATEFUL ones! For I am grateful!

Thank you so much, it's really wonderful that you loved the progress of their reconciliation (which admittedly was rather sped up thanks to hormones, oh boys).

Hoping to have 21 up by the end of the week-ish. My God, only three chapters left, where did it GO?

cjs_forever October 12 2011, 03:28:14 UTC

Oh shit.

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a_glass_parade October 12 2011, 04:55:37 UTC

INDEED.

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lulu_kitty October 12 2011, 03:32:44 UTC

HOLYMOTHERFUCKINGSHITHOLYMOTHERFUCKINGSHITHOLYMOTHERFUCKINGSHITOMG!
NOOOOO!

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a_glass_parade October 12 2011, 04:55:00 UTC

I'm planning to spend all day tomorrow transcribing my stack of handwritten notes into Word. I don't think it will be too much longer before 21 is up...

Thank you, darling! It's always so lovely when people say my characterization is consistent with the show. You're splendid.

ice_flow October 12 2011, 04:23:28 UTC

Omg, *kicks the table/chair/bucket* OWW!!! damnit. can't believe you cut it off there!!! T_T

a_glass_parade October 12 2011, 04:53:58 UTC

Didn't I warn you it was cliffhangers all the way out from last chapter?

I meant to...

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kikwangs October 12 2011, 07:12:11 UTC

Ahh, things got better! They got so much better. I was so happy when Blaine just gave in and lol he really couldn't stay too angry for long could he. And I'm so glad there's not even a tiny bit of tension between him and Kurt anymore, and that he understands and forgave him. Can I just say that I love your writing, because I do. Not just the story and the perfect voices you have for the characters, but the way you write. Everything flows perfectly, in a way that I'm able to lose myself completely in the scene and the dialogue and then the chapter ends and I'm thrown back out of the little world you've created and as much as that sucks, it makes me fall in love with this story even more. It's amazing.

AND GOD WAY TO END A CHAPTER :|

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a_glass_parade October 15 2011, 02:59:08 UTC

Well...twenty one is up...

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