[novakfest fic] "Illinois & Kansas"

Nov 16, 2011 08:03

Title: Illinois & Kansas
Author: a_carnal_mink
Recipient: janie_tangerine
Pairing/Characters: light Jimmy/Dean + Cas
Rating: PG13 for wartime violence, language
Warnings: small liberties taken with WWII history
Spoilers: AU, so none
Word Count: 6,760 words
Beta: the always ace cassiopeia7
Prompt(s): "WWII AU in which Dean and Jimmy end up fighting next to each other. Jimmy is ( Read more... )

just fuck already, words...words, nerves: i have them, blue, fic, blue blue blue, cerulean is a deal breaker, jimmy novak, writing, raised you from perdition, writing is hard!

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a_phoenixdragon November 16 2011, 11:44:27 UTC
Ohhhh, how I love the voice you give Jimmy - how he resonates so clearly here!! And your Castiel and Dean are (hands down) some of the best characterisations in fandom. Just sheer gorgeousness through and through.

The honesty, the beauty of communication through a letter was sheer genius - you have really outdone yourself love!

*HUGS*

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a_carnal_mink November 16 2011, 21:06:50 UTC

You're too kind, darlin'. X-) But thank-you for such wonderful praise. That means a lot! *squishes you*

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lostakasha November 16 2011, 17:09:55 UTC
This was very clever and felt so real -- it's such cool concept and very well executed. I'm always a little leery of AUs because so many of them start out with an interesting concept and run off the rails right away with either crazy OOC-ness or a complete lack of historical grounding. Not so with this. Great stuff!

Thanks for sharing.

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a_carnal_mink November 16 2011, 21:09:32 UTC

Heh, I'm leery of AUs myself! Have barely read but two or three, maybe, in my entire fandom(s) history. :) So, thanks very much for the stamp of approval. Much appreciated!

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wickedvirtue November 16 2011, 19:17:14 UTC
I usually bypass Jimmy stories but something in your summary made me give it a go. (It could've just been trusting you to be an amazing author and make me like Jimmy.) I'm so glad I read this because it was unique and so very interesting! Jimmy's voice was perfect and Dean's background presence in the writing was also perfectly him. I like that Castiel's actions (and what Jimmy surmises from them) tell a lot about him, despite his limited presence.

This whole thing, thanks for it!

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a_carnal_mink November 16 2011, 21:13:16 UTC

Blush-inducing praise, indeed, thank-you so much! X-) Using the Jimmy-writing-a-letter format kinda boxed me in a tad, leaving Cas and Dean with little on the actual page, so being told they came through strong enough is very bolstering.

Cheers, m'dear! :)

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janie_tangerine November 16 2011, 23:04:54 UTC
OH MY GOD THIS WAS AWESOME ( ... )

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a_carnal_mink November 23 2011, 13:36:26 UTC

I AM SO RELIEVED THAT YOU ENJOYED IT, DARLING, I CAN HARDLY TELL YOU. :D

I don't think I would've actually attempted such an AU for anyone else, frankly. But you are one of the biggest sweethearts in this fandom and you've done lovely ficcage for me in the past and I just really wanted to try and give you the best I could. And yay!, you liked it! *bounces*

Unfortunately for the pdf, the fonts I used didn't include all the "funny" characters like letters with accents and such, but still. I'm glad the format worked okay enough to make the whole thing just that little bit extra good for you. :)

And aw, Sam was in the Pacific?

I thought it'd make the best sense - being older, Dean would've joined up first and naturally would've been sent to the European front, right? :) So then when Sam gets to join up... yeah. Plus, it allowed me to "show off" some of the Filipino stuff I've got by osmosis during 10 years of being married into a Filipino family. *taps nose conspiratorially* ;)

I had a flash of how would Dean be if he was ( ... )

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axilet November 17 2011, 05:54:23 UTC
WWII AU *______*

All the little historical details, the building blocks of Dean's and Jimmy's friendship, especially the awesome re-telling of the raising from hellfire bit of canon. And their voices are just so well done. ahahaha Dean acting like a movie star XD

In short: WIN.

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a_carnal_mink November 22 2011, 23:54:38 UTC

In short: THANKS! :)

I'm really pleased all the little bits and pieces worked for you. Cheers!

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