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sandymg June 14 2010, 16:13:32 UTC
Mid way comment. Wow. What a great noir take. Modern yet not. So much atmosphere. Fantastic language. I'm even going to forgive the cigarettes. Well. Maybe :)

gonna move on now. just wanted to say how much fun this start has been.

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soldierly June 14 2010, 17:39:54 UTC
Haven't finished the whole bit but am stopping to say

JUSTIN BARTHA

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE <333

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sycophantastic July 21 2010, 12:09:08 UTC
Heeeeey... I've seen Jensen's outfit before! ;)

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bloody_american August 5 2010, 10:36:25 UTC
"What in pluperfect hell..." Dost I spy a Gay Perry reference? XD

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linda78 November 19 2012, 23:24:34 UTC
love the way this story is written

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