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zampano in __vam

My new Vam AU!! Yay!!

Mar 01, 2006 19:37

Title: Untitled As of Yet...Any Suggestions?
Pairing: Vam
Rating: TBD…probably hard R
Genre: AU
Summary: A curator learns a deadly secret - one that will literally consume him if kept.

Yes, it's another vampire fic >.<

( Chapter 1 )

Comments 32

suchapeach07 March 2 2006, 03:35:42 UTC

See, I was all ready to be like "HELLZ YEAH, BITCHES!!!"

And then you had to say "or the grammar is wrong". I am such a grammer nerd (really odd that I'm not often asked to beta) that my brain automatically combed the entire chapter - and made me really pissed (at my brain) for finding something tiny and refusing to not comment here, so here it is, straight from the GrammarBitch3000:

Dunn - Bam’s friend and co-worker, had

Which, grammatically, should be
Dunn - Bam’s friend and co-worker - had
OR
Dunn, Bam’s friend and co-worker, had

Other than that teeny tiny thing, I LOVE THIS. I'm really looking forward to chapter two!

zampano March 3 2006, 01:37:29 UTC

thank you thank you thank you. i need to know anything that's wrong with it and this helps me SO MUCH. honestly, any little thing found makes me writing that less gross to anyone who knows grammar and reads it. you can beta for me if you wish XD

zampano March 3 2006, 01:38:03 UTC

my* :D

suchapeach07 March 4 2006, 20:38:07 UTC

Absolutely! I'll beta for you whenever you want me to! You can just e-mail stories to me at such_a_peach_07@yahoo.com and I'll send them back edited ASAP (I check my e-mail every day!).

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hardrock69 March 2 2006, 03:49:23 UTC

*reads*

*rereads*

*nods*

yep, I like it. More soon!

zampano March 3 2006, 01:40:39 UTC

thank you <333 more tomorrow!

mytornromance March 2 2006, 05:45:54 UTC

Standing ovation! First for the impending vampire-ness of it all. *coughs admitting big nerdiness* Second for the fact that as a museum nerd myself, I got all giggly at this lovely sentence As curator of their small museum, Bam was into weird things, such as old texts and artifacts. (my degree come May will be a Masters in Anthropology and Museum studies and yes, I am into old things)

Okay, personal nerd moment aside. This is fantabulous! More soon pretty please.

raine_insane March 2 2006, 06:08:12 UTC

*pets the perty geekers*

my best friend is trying to get into a museum curatorship program.

mytornromance March 2 2006, 06:10:52 UTC

*purrs happily*

Oh oh, good luck to her....we're a fun bunch once you get past the weirdness.

raine_insane March 2 2006, 06:14:43 UTC

Him actually.

And I know all about it, I used to be a library bitch!

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zampano March 5 2006, 16:19:46 UTC

pssh because i forgot to put the end bold thingy and tried to make it look like i meant for it to be that way ;)

thanks for blowing my cover, dipshit.