the story of you and me

[5thofficial]

by stickmarionette

Comments

[applegnat]

This deserves so much more of a review than I'm currently capable of leaving, I just want to leave a placeholder saying that I love it, and believe it may be one of your best. And come back in a while after I've read it a few more times. Thank you for writing it.

[stickmarionette]

You're very welcome! I struggled to get this story out, so it's great to hear that the end result hasn't been affected by the time I had writing it.

[stickmarionette]

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

[ladyrocketdale]

you. you. you wrote about them. about the story. about what really happened. you mentionated the rooming with Oksy. you talked about Lucas. you wrote so pretty words, such a nice way.

you're my new favourite person today ♥

[stickmarionette]

Aww, thank you! I really wanted to give as true a picture as I could without being able to get into these guys' heads, so that's great to hear.

[labyrinthically]

Oh Lee, this is so gorgeous. Aww, they're so tiny, and I love how you show their growth through the tournament, and how well it connects to your last cornerflag piece without mentioning it. Fierce little Argies. *claps*

(Also love=both of them wanting to room with Oscar. Boys :).)

[stickmarionette]

Thanks! I do adore them so. :D

(At the Olympics, both Oscar and Kun wanted to room with Leo. Boys will be boys. :D)

[txorakeriak]

This is an absolutely fascinating, breathtaking story. I love your attention to detail and the way you wove actual facts into your story. This and your absorbing portrayal of the characters and their developing relationship makes the fic incredibly realistic. Thank you for an utterly enjoyable read!

*adds to memories*

[stickmarionette]

You're very welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it.