Two Haikus

Jun 19, 2012 03:33

Here are two related haikus for Sick!Wilson Poetry Night.

Camping in a tent
Is something Wilson enjoys
Up until it leaks

Cold, wet, and freezing
Wilson crawls to House’s tent
Now he’s warm and dry

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menolly_au June 19 2012, 10:10:06 UTC
Oh, that's really lovely, great job!

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3rdgal12 June 19 2012, 18:32:20 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked. :)

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brindlewolf June 19 2012, 17:03:40 UTC
I like them both, especially the second one! ♥

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3rdgal12 June 19 2012, 18:32:34 UTC
Thanks!

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damigella_314 June 19 2012, 18:26:03 UTC
Good that he crawls, otherwise I'm sure he'd bang his head against a branch... and perfect ending! Thank you.

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3rdgal12 June 19 2012, 18:33:17 UTC
otherwise I'm sure he'd bang his head
Too true! Glad you enjoyed. :)

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petitecuriosity June 20 2012, 02:56:25 UTC
Oooh. Those fit together so nicely!

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3rdgal12 June 20 2012, 05:04:33 UTC
Thanks!

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yarroway June 20 2012, 13:15:38 UTC
Aww! I like this. You make the poems flow very nicely.

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3rdgal12 June 20 2012, 22:13:13 UTC
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. :)

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