What makes a story bad? Bad grammar, soap-opera dialogue, infantilization or feminilization of the characters (I'm a 16 y/o girl and I make my male, 30 y/o, 6'2, 250 pounds character act like I would" style, to be precise) Sorry bb, sometimes I just didn'T see it... Rape recovery Yes. BUT NOT THE MAGICAL HEALING COCK! ROFL - wut?:D
Hehehe...oh, right. Have I ever told you that? Whuush. Hehe...no, seriously, I know that sometimes you slip into that but trust me, I've seen MUCH MUCH worse. Don't say you're sorry anyway. Don't be sorry. Oh, and beware of the teddybear (if you know what I mean!). I like fics in which men are men and when men are weak they show their weaknesses like men (viva la redundancy!).
The magical healing cock. Oh dearie. Hehe. Ok.
Character A gets raped/beaten/devastatingly heartbroken by someone. He's depressed, he doesn't want to be touched, he never wants anyone else to touch him and he forever swears off sex and love. Then whoop! Character B comes along and sweeps Char.A right off his feet, then (watch out, here the magical healing cock comes into play) Char A agrees to have magical healing sex because "OMG CHAR:B, YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE I COULD EVER HAVE SEX WITH!" (very often there's also mad flailing involved). The magical healing dick is inserted and so Char.A can forget everything about his traumatic past and live together happily
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Why does the majority of your icons watch upwards?
Queer as folk. DUH. I always skip to the sex parts anyway. Am I the only one who thinks that the Brian from the UK version and the Justin of the US version are terribly ugly? They should have swapped them with their counterparts. The couple Brian US-Justin UK would have been hotness squared...
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The worst story you have written: All my stories are my worst stories. ~ Let me hit you with a tree, yeah?
Does something squick you? MPREG, incest, bestiality... ~ Dude, Mpreg *shivers*. I've discovered a bestiality kink lately...DAMN YOU SPN FANDOM ><.
Chanslash is people under 18 having sex, btw.
The hell is May/December?
AND NOW I SHALL STEAL THIS.
And please forgive my pointless commentary of your answers, I couldn't help it.
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Chanslash is a no, then. Mostly. I mean, 16-17 is good but still on the verge of creepy.
DO IT AND COMMENT AS YOU LIKE. I WILL RECIPROCATE.
MPREG IS WRONG! AND SO IS THAT PAIRING.
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May/December is a no then...and some of my own kinks make me feel pretty creepy, haha xD.
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My boss cornered me, I'll comment later!
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Sorry bb, sometimes I just didn'T see it...
Rape recovery Yes. BUT NOT THE MAGICAL HEALING COCK!
ROFL - wut?:D
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The magical healing cock. Oh dearie. Hehe. Ok.
Character A gets raped/beaten/devastatingly heartbroken by someone. He's depressed, he doesn't want to be touched, he never wants anyone else to touch him and he forever swears off sex and love. Then whoop! Character B comes along and sweeps Char.A right off his feet, then (watch out, here the magical healing cock comes into play) Char A agrees to have magical healing sex because "OMG CHAR:B, YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE I COULD EVER HAVE SEX WITH!" (very often there's also mad flailing involved). The magical healing dick is inserted and so Char.A can forget everything about his traumatic past and live together happily ( ... )
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Queer as folk. DUH. I always skip to the sex parts anyway. Am I the only one who thinks that the Brian from the UK version and the Justin of the US version are terribly ugly? They should have swapped them with their counterparts. The couple Brian US-Justin UK would have been hotness squared...
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