Guh, very hot in the beginning. Lovely. The first line drew me in, needless to say.
And then we get to the part where she kills him (poor, poor Zuko) and I went, "...well, fuck, I wish we could have had some sort of angsty, desperate hate!sex before he died somehow," but no matter. It was still very nice.
See, I was thinking about the hate!sex but I'm pretty sure I don't write smut very well, although I read it. It took me forever to get the hotness! in the beginning anyway... Thanks (:!
I will! I'm typing up Chapter One of my story Fire Lilies right now, in fact. (: You may want to check out the intro. Its somewhere in my mass of LJ posts....
And then we get to the part where she kills him (poor, poor Zuko) and I went, "...well, fuck, I wish we could have had some sort of angsty, desperate hate!sex before he died somehow," but no matter. It was still very nice.
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Thanks (:!
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Keep writing!
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I'm typing up Chapter One of my story Fire Lilies right now, in fact. (: You may want to check out the intro. Its somewhere in my mass of LJ posts....
*prods post conspicuously* XD
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Looking!
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