Jul 26, 2004 23:42
alright i'm gonna really jump out in the deep end here. i havnt written anything in a year. poetry i mean. well last night i was in a fit of rage and hurt and just a bunch of emotions. so i took a stab at writing. because it was always the one thing i could vent my anger through. so i guess i'm gonna post it on her. let me know what you think. and i mean dont just say on that's bad or oh that's good. i mean i really want to know.
Can you feel the rain
slowly comming down
Can you feel the wind
stroking through your hair
Can you feel the night
surrounding us
Can you feel the moonlight
dance upon our skin
Can you see the stars
bright in the sky
Can you see the darkness
all around
Can you see the rain
hit the ground
Can you smell the air
of the storm
Can you smell the calmness
of the night
Can you smell the cold
of the winter
Can you smell the dawn
of the new day
Chelsea M.