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Jul 26, 2004 23:42


alright i'm gonna really jump out in the deep end here. i havnt written anything in a year. poetry i mean. well last night i was in a fit of rage and hurt and just a bunch of emotions. so i took a stab at writing. because it was always the one thing i could vent my anger through. so i guess i'm gonna post it on her. let me know what you think. and i mean dont just say on that's bad or oh that's good. i mean i really want to know.

Can you feel the rain

slowly comming down

Can you feel the wind

stroking through your hair

Can you feel the night

surrounding us

Can you feel the moonlight

dance upon our skin

Can you see the stars

bright in the sky

Can you see the darkness

all around

Can you see the rain

hit the ground

Can you smell the air

of the storm

Can you smell the calmness

of the night

Can you smell the cold

of the winter

Can you smell the dawn

of the new day

Chelsea M.
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