Catch Me If I Ever Fall (Part 2/?)

[zory22]

Chapter 2  Empty

Party Poison's P. O. V.

He looked so much like a drac it was sickening.  They had turned my beautiful Fun Ghoul into a Korse clone.  His long chin length hair was gone, leaving short, neat hair in its place.  His skintone had no color, his eyes were blank and empty. Could he even think for himself anymore? I wondered.

"Come on Ghoul,

Comments

[julorean]

Ooooo. Cool POV switch, we get some more info on things. I like seeing things from Poison's POV. Of course Ghoul would save him. <3

Hmm. I wonder, did Frank have tattoos before the accident? If it's not a false memory, anyway. Ha, he might freak a bit, seeing he's inked all over. XD

[zory22]

I really like that idea and it's not something I've thought of until your comment. And Ghoul has to save him. I have 4 possible endings to this but it'll be a while before I get there. I plan on doing a couple of more but mostly Franks and Gerards. Thanks for commenting! I should have more up soon. (Within the next day or 2)

[gerardlover24]

Ohmygod I love it!! That's really cool how you did that first chapter! More please! Oh, and I'm open to be your beta.

[zory22]

Thank you so much. I would really appreciate that if you would like to be my beta. I haven't started the 4th chapter yet but once I do it won't take long at all.

[gerardlover24]

Okay, sweet!